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Art of Life

A senryu

7 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this verse, Franca, and can see your enthusiasm in the bright colors and the phrase ... splash with your boldest hues... a well written short verse!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu, Art of Life, is presented in a 5-7-5 formatting and suggests that everything is waiting for you to act. Life isn't yours until you live it.

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

reply by the author on 20-May-2020
    Ciao Bill Schott !

    Nicely put .. this virus though has put a halt on our lives ... plans ...

    ..anyways , this wee poem brought me luck ...yeah!

    Thank you for reviewing it .

    Keep safe!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

Beautiful entry for the
Senryu You! writing prompt contest. The presentation is fantastic. Good syllable count. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you!

    I appreciate the positive response.

    When I saw the pic with those vibrant colours I was compelled to write a 5-7- 5 for it. ( smile)

    Keep safe !

Comment from Opal Rose
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Yes, yes, yes! I can! I will! I must! I love this message. This is prompting us all to embrace our individuality, in the purest, most unashamed fashion. I love the colorful image selected to accompany this colorful poem. Well done. Best of luck in all of your writing endeavors.

-Opal Rose

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you so much for the enthusiastic review ...
    Glad that my entry inspires you.

    I found the pic first ..
    .....the bright colours filled me with verve too( biggrin)

    Take care!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed this colourful write full of life and the vibrancy of it, your good advice made me want to get out there and enjoy myself, an uplifting Senryu and you won my vote here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Glad my wee poem made such a good impression on you

    A warm thank you for voting my entry.

    Take care Dolly!
Comment from A Little Bird
Exceptional
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Congratulations on this vibrant piece. I love it's upbeat vibe. The image you've included complements it well. Good luck with the competition! Stay healthy and safe during these difficult times!

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Ciao!

    I love the vivid colours of your cute avatar too !

    Thank you for the positive response and the six star vote ..I appreciate the encouragement .

    I wish you a safe week too !

    Ciao!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a good Senryu or Human Haiku about art of living, human nature or aspect is well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

reply by the author on 20-May-2020


    Ciao Alcreator !

    ...glad you enjoyed my wee poem .. it actually came first in the contest

    ..nice to know that others found it worthy of their vote.

    Take care !