Matt and Jiffy Join the Army 9
a one scene script with Matt and Jiffy15 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
This is pretty hysterical. I can see this acted out before some troops - who may or may not be ready to laugh at these things. hahaha I can also see the Drill Sargeants NOT laughing. hahaha
Very nice. Still reading.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Bill,
This is pretty hysterical. I can see this acted out before some troops - who may or may not be ready to laugh at these things. hahaha I can also see the Drill Sargeants NOT laughing. hahaha
Very nice. Still reading.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks, Robyn.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The poor Sergeant just needs to quit now before he blows an artery in the brain or something! ;) Wonderful entertainment as usual Bill -- as I've said before these are my favorite, bar none!! :) Excellent and uplifting (guess that's a bit weird, but whatev's as my students say!)... ;) :) Take care this week! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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The poor Sergeant just needs to quit now before he blows an artery in the brain or something! ;) Wonderful entertainment as usual Bill -- as I've said before these are my favorite, bar none!! :) Excellent and uplifting (guess that's a bit weird, but whatev's as my students say!)... ;) :) Take care this week! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you, Yvette, for the nice review. I enjoy Matt and Jiffy and Pons and Ned. Even Pez and Pallas are fun, though I have to go dark with them. Happy Mother?s Day!
Comment from sunnilicious
That artwork choice would scare anyone from joining the military. And this story is rough. The military people seem that way. I think you're on to something. Keep up the great work.
May you and your family have a nice Mother's Day :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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That artwork choice would scare anyone from joining the military. And this story is rough. The military people seem that way. I think you're on to something. Keep up the great work.
May you and your family have a nice Mother's Day :)
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you, sunnilicious
Comment from lauralumummu
Well, I have never written a script, so I am no expert. I like yours and the interesting format. The story contains a lot of action and excitement. All the best, Stay safe, Laura ^_^----
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Well, I have never written a script, so I am no expert. I like yours and the interesting format. The story contains a lot of action and excitement. All the best, Stay safe, Laura ^_^----
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks, Laura
Comment from nomi338
Uh oh, there is about to be some excrement going down very soon. Losers, chumps. I have seen this before, Sergeants do not handle these type of recruits very well. Somebody is bound to get hurt, very badly.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Uh oh, there is about to be some excrement going down very soon. Losers, chumps. I have seen this before, Sergeants do not handle these type of recruits very well. Somebody is bound to get hurt, very badly.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I?ll try to keep everybody from hurting each other. Jiffy?s mouth makes it hard.
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Agreed.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bill Wow you are a tough drill master Does that come from experience ?I bet Matt and Jiff will be pains in the A for the sargent will read next chapter. a fun read or should it be serious Push up in progress LOL Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hi Bill Wow you are a tough drill master Does that come from experience ?I bet Matt and Jiff will be pains in the A for the sargent will read next chapter. a fun read or should it be serious Push up in progress LOL Cheers Chris
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks, Chris. Hope they bend before the Army does.
Comment from judiverse
I wonder if even a drill sergeant would be allowed to carry on like that these days. Everyone has to be sensitive these days. Not surprisingly, Matt and Jiffy are not in trouble. They can't refrain from stirring things up. I wonder what a day of dirt will involve. I hope it doesn't mean eating it. Maybe they'll learn not to irritate Sarg. Very entertaining. judi
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I wonder if even a drill sergeant would be allowed to carry on like that these days. Everyone has to be sensitive these days. Not surprisingly, Matt and Jiffy are not in trouble. They can't refrain from stirring things up. I wonder what a day of dirt will involve. I hope it doesn't mean eating it. Maybe they'll learn not to irritate Sarg. Very entertaining. judi
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is a little more Corps philosophy than Army. The current Army policy is play or go home.
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Those guys are certainly playing. Maybe at the end we'll see them nicely disciplines. judi
Comment from lyenochka
I am guessing Happy Valley isn't really very happy. I am getting worried for Matt and Jiffy. They don't seem to catch on to the Sarge's affectionate nicknames.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I am guessing Happy Valley isn't really very happy. I am getting worried for Matt and Jiffy. They don't seem to catch on to the Sarge's affectionate nicknames.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I see Matt and Jiffy as the Hawkeye Pierce and Trapper John McIntyre of Army basic training. Perhaps they can meet military rigors and stay cool.
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, Bill, I loved this. Matt and Jiffy have some getting used to. Don't they? They are reluctant to say the least. But I'm sure that will be knocked out of them soon enough. I'm enjoying this. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hahaha, Bill, I loved this. Matt and Jiffy have some getting used to. Don't they? They are reluctant to say the least. But I'm sure that will be knocked out of them soon enough. I'm enjoying this. Ulla:))
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, Ulla. Yes, the best swords need a lot of hammering.
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Hehe, Very true.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill Schott
I had sooo much fun reading you a one scene script with Matt and Jiffy
Matt and Jiffy Join the Army.
What made me get a kick out of your script were the humorous way you used the word maggot. And while doing push ups and the sly remarks from Recruit 1:
Hey, I found a penny! (smiles I wonder if he was going to put the penny in his piggy bank
Then
Recruit 2: I've got dirt in my teeth.
I wonder if the SGT asked why were you eating dirt and did you bring your tooth brush
Please continue
Gert
Gert
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello Bill Schott
I had sooo much fun reading you a one scene script with Matt and Jiffy
Matt and Jiffy Join the Army.
What made me get a kick out of your script were the humorous way you used the word maggot. And while doing push ups and the sly remarks from Recruit 1:
Hey, I found a penny! (smiles I wonder if he was going to put the penny in his piggy bank
Then
Recruit 2: I've got dirt in my teeth.
I wonder if the SGT asked why were you eating dirt and did you bring your tooth brush
Please continue
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks, Gert, for the great review.
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You are welcome Bill Schott
Gert