Comment from suep

Excellent

Great presentation on your 5-7-5. Love the colors and artwork. Perfectly fits with your work. Great message about not staying angry. I love the play on words with 'joined at the lip'. Nice work. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

Thanks for your lovely review. Kiss kiss.

reply by suep on 05-May-2020

LOL. You're welcome! :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! Think it would be more enjoyable if they weren't around 24/7! ;) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 05-May-2020

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reply by the author on 05-May-2020

kiss kiss - thanks for your review!

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

Oh that last line is killer!!!! Loved this so much. I try not to stay mad for too long at my husband! Lol. I also loved the way you presented the piece as well. Super cute!

 Comment Written 04-May-2020

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reply by the author on 04-May-2020

Thank you. Kiss kiss for reviewing something for so little reward apart from my gratitude.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Good advice here! I like the way you have used the old cliche 'joined at the hip' and given it fresh life as 'joined at the lip'! To kiss and make up is a great healer. It's never a good thing to go to bed angry.

 Comment Written 04-May-2020

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reply by the author on 04-May-2020

Thanks for reviewing a poem that pays bugger-all.
Appreciative kisses!