Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "In Quarantine"na-po-wri-mo contest
6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about the constraints and affects of the self quarantine have on us. We can only think about being free to go where we like to go. Although we keep ourselves busy for as long as we can.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about the constraints and affects of the self quarantine have on us. We can only think about being free to go where we like to go. Although we keep ourselves busy for as long as we can.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It's a cycle that gets really old, really fast, doesn't it, Dove?!! :) :) This is a well-written, timely offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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It's a cycle that gets really old, really fast, doesn't it, Dove?!! :) :) This is a well-written, timely offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your compliments and review. and for your good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from zanya
Yes will said and isn't it wonderful to have such activities in one's life to do now when we are living through such strange times - sometimes it's hard to believe this is actually happening in our world !!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Yes will said and isn't it wonderful to have such activities in one's life to do now when we are living through such strange times - sometimes it's hard to believe this is actually happening in our world !!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear zanya, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this poem, you state you are trapped in quarantine, but you care to do some good jobs hoping for freedom of living, well said; thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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In this poem, you state you are trapped in quarantine, but you care to do some good jobs hoping for freedom of living, well said; thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from LisaMay
You have three excellent activities to enjoy, plus you are still alive, so I'd say things are OK for you. Your poem expresses the exasperation a lot of people are feeling due to loss of freedom of choice.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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You have three excellent activities to enjoy, plus you are still alive, so I'd say things are OK for you. Your poem expresses the exasperation a lot of people are feeling due to loss of freedom of choice.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear LisaMay, Thank you for your getting the feeling from my poem that I wanted to convey. I am better off than some people, because of these activities mentioned in the poem and of course, being alive! I do know a lot of other people simply don't know what to do with themselves at this time. Dove
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Comment from January L'Angelle
I know that some people feel trapped but I just take it as an opportunity to switch gears and do things differently. I do read more, definitely write more and meditate for the first time ever. Your poem resonates with me. Respectfully, January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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I know that some people feel trapped but I just take it as an opportunity to switch gears and do things differently. I do read more, definitely write more and meditate for the first time ever. Your poem resonates with me. Respectfully, January L.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear January, Thank you for feeling and doing the same things I do in this state of quarantine. Thanks for your review. Dove