Homage to Beauty
5-7-5 for Autumn11 total reviews
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
Your poem is lovely. Thanks for sharing this work. I like the poem, the content is simple and comprehensive. The image is nice too. The rhymes too are good
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Your poem is lovely. Thanks for sharing this work. I like the poem, the content is simple and comprehensive. The image is nice too. The rhymes too are good
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
Comment from sunnilicious
Nice visual imagery created. Good alliterations with C and S words. Good lyrical flow through the vowel resonance. Nice rhyme with days-praise. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest :)
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Nice visual imagery created. Good alliterations with C and S words. Good lyrical flow through the vowel resonance. Nice rhyme with days-praise. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from smileycloud
very good tribute to autumn
the reference to fallen leaves pictured in the minds eye as stained glass windows is so very unique and appealing
have a smiley day
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very good tribute to autumn
the reference to fallen leaves pictured in the minds eye as stained glass windows is so very unique and appealing
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines is good.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines is good.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
First of all, Best of Luck with this entry. I love the visual of colours of stained-glass windows. It mirrors the reflection of the beauty of nature. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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First of all, Best of Luck with this entry. I love the visual of colours of stained-glass windows. It mirrors the reflection of the beauty of nature. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Victoria Grace
Very pretty! The colors go perfect with the narrative, and I adore the word choices. "Autumn praise" made me imagine all the New England foliage. Great workð???ð???
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Very pretty! The colors go perfect with the narrative, and I adore the word choices. "Autumn praise" made me imagine all the New England foliage. Great workð???ð???
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from faith bosire
Salute
this is such a great homage
Such a beautiful piece of work. I love it so good
Keep up with such. It is a good poem for the ode contest. It deserves a thumbs up indeed
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Salute
this is such a great homage
Such a beautiful piece of work. I love it so good
Keep up with such. It is a good poem for the ode contest. It deserves a thumbs up indeed
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Rmocruz
I'm sill awaiting the arrival of Spring. It's still cold in Connecticut.
Correct to format with good rhyme.
Well Done!
A promising entry, best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I'm sill awaiting the arrival of Spring. It's still cold in Connecticut.
Correct to format with good rhyme.
Well Done!
A promising entry, best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Homage to Beauty, has the right set up and seems to suggest confusion as the days of spring are so very much more suited to fall.
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This 5-7-5, Homage to Beauty, has the right set up and seems to suggest confusion as the days of spring are so very much more suited to fall.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from RodG
I like your metaphor of stained glass windows for describing autumn leaves. This is emphasized by your lovely picture. You also set the scene nicely by referring to "chilly days." Rod
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I like your metaphor of stained glass windows for describing autumn leaves. This is emphasized by your lovely picture. You also set the scene nicely by referring to "chilly days." Rod
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2020