Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Patriotism"na-po-wri-mo contest
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A victory and independence for America which is as it should be, but the Brits thought they ruled the world, but sound found out that they can only just about rule Britain! A fine patriotic write Donna, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A victory and independence for America which is as it should be, but the Brits thought they ruled the world, but sound found out that they can only just about rule Britain! A fine patriotic write Donna, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your compliment and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
A detailed and descriptive account of history, I think this works well as a poem. Some good descriptive language that gets the point across quickly and easily - crushed.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A detailed and descriptive account of history, I think this works well as a poem. Some good descriptive language that gets the point across quickly and easily - crushed.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Whodunnit, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Marie, you have got to pop back in there and either greatly enlarge the font or make it light blue or even yellow, but it is waaaay too hard on the eyes right now... ;) :) :) A lovely offering in acrostic that is a quick peek at the years leading up to that 1776 start to the country! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Oh, Marie, you have got to pop back in there and either greatly enlarge the font or make it light blue or even yellow, but it is waaaay too hard on the eyes right now... ;) :) :) A lovely offering in acrostic that is a quick peek at the years leading up to that 1776 start to the country! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Yvette, thanks for your compliments, review and suggestion. Dove
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written acrostic poem you have penned for the contest using the word patriotism. You used very good descriptive and true words. Very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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This is a very well written acrostic poem you have penned for the contest using the word patriotism. You used very good descriptive and true words. Very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Dear Teri, Thanks for your review and compliments and best wishes. Love you too, Donna
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
-an acrostic poem, with the word Patriotism, spelled in the first letters of each line, a statement of America's bravery and Independence.
Very well executed, flawless acrostic.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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-an acrostic poem, with the word Patriotism, spelled in the first letters of each line, a statement of America's bravery and Independence.
Very well executed, flawless acrostic.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Dear Marjon, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
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welcome, Dove
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like how you told a partial story of patriotism during the Revolutionary war, recalling our roots. Massachusetts was a lovely reference for the letter M.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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I like how you told a partial story of patriotism during the Revolutionary war, recalling our roots. Massachusetts was a lovely reference for the letter M.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Dear Darlene Thank you for your compliments and review Dove