Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Gypsy"Colors of each of the 4
9 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I guess that from what I've heard about Gypsies, that they're free spirits and very passionate about life and living. You've stated this very well. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I guess that from what I've heard about Gypsies, that they're free spirits and very passionate about life and living. You've stated this very well. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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We could all do with more free spirit! Thank you for a super review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your gypsy reigns in this post Gypsy!
The Pinterest image is terrific and the 5-7-5 verse equally so.
Your last line reflects the wandering lives of those gypsy bands.
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Your gypsy reigns in this post Gypsy!
The Pinterest image is terrific and the 5-7-5 verse equally so.
Your last line reflects the wandering lives of those gypsy bands.
Mark
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Mark, Thank you for a super review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Don't you just wish you could harness it and have it at the ready for days when your own passion is waning...? :) :) A lovely offering for the contest, Trisha - good luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Don't you just wish you could harness it and have it at the ready for days when your own passion is waning...? :) :) A lovely offering for the contest, Trisha - good luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you for a super review oh yes, passion is becoming allusive from every angle!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Writing contest.
This short piece describes the Gypsy life very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Writing contest.
This short piece describes the Gypsy life very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you for a super review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
Your 5-7-5 poem is really a good the picture of the Gypsy and your descriptive words are excellent. The best to you in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Hello Bucketlist
Your 5-7-5 poem is really a good the picture of the Gypsy and your descriptive words are excellent. The best to you in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Gert
Hugs, Trisha
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Smiles to you Bucketlist
Comment from Teri7
Trish, This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Trish, This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you Teri, love and blessings back to you
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, Trisha. I've written two stories about gypsies. They are "unfettered" and fascinating. We have a band that travels to my community every now and then. Unfortunately, they rob houses. Anyway, we get a mass phone from our city council that simply states, "The gypsies are back."
Nevertheless, they still fascinate me. And, I think you did a great job of capturing their free spirit. You should make the leader board with this one.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I like this, Trisha. I've written two stories about gypsies. They are "unfettered" and fascinating. We have a band that travels to my community every now and then. Unfortunately, they rob houses. Anyway, we get a mass phone from our city council that simply states, "The gypsies are back."
Nevertheless, they still fascinate me. And, I think you did a great job of capturing their free spirit. You should make the leader board with this one.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Yes, fascinating! When I was small, women came door to door selling heather corsages. If we didn?t buy one they said there would
be a curse on our house. But the colors and lifestyle are feisty!
Thanks
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Trisha.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-A good topic and
positive message.
-I like the imagery, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Trisha.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-A good topic and
positive message.
-I like the imagery, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha.
Comment from damommy
This is a very apt description of a gypsy's way of life. A very free way of life with no permanent ties.
Beautifully presented and a great photo. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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This is a very apt description of a gypsy's way of life. A very free way of life with no permanent ties.
Beautifully presented and a great photo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha
