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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good Bicpen. You're a deep thinker that doesn't want to be bothered with surface knowledge and the simple ways of thinking. It sounds like the obvious is of no interest to you. It's just that, obvious. You'd rather flex your mind's muscle and give them a stimulating workout. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is really good Bicpen. You're a deep thinker that doesn't want to be bothered with surface knowledge and the simple ways of thinking. It sounds like the obvious is of no interest to you. It's just that, obvious. You'd rather flex your mind's muscle and give them a stimulating workout. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent thank you much my friend or as some say especially in Singapore TANKNA very much. Your input is muchly appreciated ... and its good to flex those neuroplectic pathways it opens up more oxygen to our brains so we can think clearer.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What wonderful advice and observational reflections, my friend!! :) Some postings really singe the imagination's limit, pushing it further than it knew possible, and then some reviews reveal a lack of imagination all together.... some are very wrapped up in rules they learned back in school and some are not even aware of rules when it comes to poetry that sings from their pen.... Best thing? No two poets are the same (although there is a bit of flavoring evident here and there) and appreciation of such is the TRUE requirement! :) A great offering, George -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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What wonderful advice and observational reflections, my friend!! :) Some postings really singe the imagination's limit, pushing it further than it knew possible, and then some reviews reveal a lack of imagination all together.... some are very wrapped up in rules they learned back in school and some are not even aware of rules when it comes to poetry that sings from their pen.... Best thing? No two poets are the same (although there is a bit of flavoring evident here and there) and appreciation of such is the TRUE requirement! :) A great offering, George -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you my friend Im glad we can all sing from the same hymn book it makes the choir sound more even and hopefully the melodies will shine when we get a baritone were best just to leave him or her on their own seems to be the general idea but sometimes I like to listen to them to make the higher pitches seem more astounding some baritones when their on a roll are most favourable and make their own voice in the choir here we can all find our own voices and sing together ... not just in the bath or shower!
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Lol! Harmony is a wonderful thing... ;) ;)
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Isn't it just ... lol.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like how this piece ends by pointing out that there are a varity of styles in the world. It speaks to difference which is something a lot of people refuse to see.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I like how this piece ends by pointing out that there are a varity of styles in the world. It speaks to difference which is something a lot of people refuse to see.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent the world of fan-story is an eclectic mix an we are free to choose what we like there are all sorts of things on offer if we just look ...
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Amen! Captivating statements and wise advice to follow! I whole heartedly agree that we all have our own unique style. I like to try different forms, but certain ones just fit me better and that is where I write best! Thank you for sharing! xoxo
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Amen! Captivating statements and wise advice to follow! I whole heartedly agree that we all have our own unique style. I like to try different forms, but certain ones just fit me better and that is where I write best! Thank you for sharing! xoxo
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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well thats what its all about finding your strengths and weaknesses ... glad you could appreciate and enjoy.
Comment from Gloria ....
Love this, Bic. A celebration to freedom "to swerve of shore, to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius, vicus" Finnegan's Wake, Perfectly aligned with a Picasso of what appears fractured to some makes complete sense to other.
A superb free verse and a call to genuine authenticity.
A pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Love this, Bic. A celebration to freedom "to swerve of shore, to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius, vicus" Finnegan's Wake, Perfectly aligned with a Picasso of what appears fractured to some makes complete sense to other.
A superb free verse and a call to genuine authenticity.
A pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent Gloria much appreciate the six stars to some life's fragments mean very little and one mans enjoyment may not be another mans enjoyment but that should not stop us from singing all about it ... much appreciated glad you could read and enjoy it for what it is.
Comment from Ricky1024
"My Question?"
Try to understand this is about a poet's ability to write and an example of reviewing.
Everybody likes the five and six stores but when you get the one or two?
What do you do?
The Bible says...
'Do Unto Others as Others Do Unto You."
But Tom says just block them!
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Anywho, this is well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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"My Question?"
Try to understand this is about a poet's ability to write and an example of reviewing.
Everybody likes the five and six stores but when you get the one or two?
What do you do?
The Bible says...
'Do Unto Others as Others Do Unto You."
But Tom says just block them!
...
Anywho, this is well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent doctor a clean bill of health ...
... once again I heard all about this idea of muting but to be fair I've got four mutes on me and I dont believe in it as we should be free to reply and discuss as we see fit without having the biblical instruction that state "... suffer not a witch to live ..." such is the feeling on some certain reviews.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yes, everyone, has a style ink hitting your eyes and boom you got the best poem ever. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your poetic inspiration.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Yes, everyone, has a style ink hitting your eyes and boom you got the best poem ever. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your poetic inspiration.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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excellent glad you could appreciate ...
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
BICPEN,
Great lessons in creative writing. I enjoyed the read but not used to the style it is written in, you may well have covered the topic in your poem.
Thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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BICPEN,
Great lessons in creative writing. I enjoyed the read but not used to the style it is written in, you may well have covered the topic in your poem.
Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent my friend keep up the good work the style is a free verse which some may even deem to be worth nothing and even venture to tell me it is not any such a thing ... such is life.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
You are right....every day is different than the next.i like your poem. Free verse is my favorite, including haiku. Good job and good luck with your book.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
You are right....every day is different than the next.i like your poem. Free verse is my favorite, including haiku. Good job and good luck with your book.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Excellent glad you could enjoy ...
Comment from juliaSjames
Didn't quite follow your thought process in this write. But you're right. We all have our songs and if we want to be authentic, then we have to make our voices heard.
Thanks for sharing your music, Bicpen. Keep singing, my friend.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Didn't quite follow your thought process in this write. But you're right. We all have our songs and if we want to be authentic, then we have to make our voices heard.
Thanks for sharing your music, Bicpen. Keep singing, my friend.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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will do I just hope I can stay in tune lol.
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:-))