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A collection of love poems.
3 total reviews
Comment from
scongrove
I love this! :) For some reason as I read along, I could hear Axel Rose's background music to the song November Rain. You did a fantastic job creating inspiring words with depth and emotion. I love the artwork you placed with your post too.
Great writing my friend. You are very talented!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
You flatter and honor me with you words and six stars. I must point out to God as the one who put it into my mind. Still, i thank you for your comments.
reply by scongrove on 07-Feb-2020
You are very welcome! Enjoyed! :)
Comment from
Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this very descriptive poem with wonderful rhyme choices. A very personal and heart warming write. I would mention that this color of blue background is so dominant that it is hard to read the script. Just an observation.
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
Thanks for letting me know about background. Will lighten it up.
Comment from
Bill Pinder
I like your creativity in expressing the truth of being able to see a greater depth in someone's eyes whom you deeply loved. I like how it is presented with the background that makes it appear to have more depth. Great job with the expressive writing. Bill
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
Thank you. Your comments are most appreciated. Your review has also been most helpful.
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