Comment from Bicpen

Excellent

mmmm ... it is endearing with a spiritual aspect of thankfulness and quiet reverence with a touch of sincerity to equate a rousing horn on a sabbath morning. It delivers slightly dysfunctional with a voice of deliberation that is stifled and may need some adjustment to become a song of the heavenly quire that is Tom's fan-story and the majestic outpouring of heavenly rapture that is our poetry.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Yep once a year time owns our ass for like $50or $60 bucks?
Thanks B
Ricky

reply by Bicpen on 04-Feb-2020

anytime ...

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Ever seen a movie Fallen with Denzel Washington about spiritual possession?
Hi Google this thousand-year-old demon and it actually existed in his passes from person to person after the person dies
Ricky

reply by Bicpen on 04-Feb-2020

Thats sounds cool Ricky it sounds like my love life ... demons come in many forms and range from spirits to principalities and powers but one things for sure there all of the same source ... the big bad Beelzebub.

There not to be trifled with and can be a real nuisance to get rid of ...

... another good movie which I've forgotten its name was one with two archangels fighting for a soul to stop Armageddon I think it might have been called the prophecy there were three of them if I remember.

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Yeah I saw that one too I try and remember I think Travolta was one of the Angels?
I'm in the front row of the Hard Rock Hotel and Casino in Atlantic City.
(Howie Mandel's comedy Club)
Awaiting the performance at 8:.00
I was here last time and I allowed myself to be fodder to their flesh!
I'm going to get revenge

reply by Bicpen on 04-Feb-2020

Excellent maybe you can put some of it in a poem and send it to us to review ...

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Hanging out at Hard Rock Hotel Casino in Atlantic City listening to the benjamins he's doing a dedicated song for my gift of Life donor Jason I told him his story I told him the band The or the artist Bryan Adams in the song summer 69 and I'm going to video it show to my youngest daughter.
Doctor Ricky1024
And I do write songs.
I'm writing some music for a band called "Steal the Sky"
From Canada.
Google them;

reply by Bicpen on 05-Feb-2020

I will at some point ... Bryan Adams was big over here especially in the eighties ...I hope you got your dancing shoes on ... I was just chilling with some r&b Alicia Keys I like the mellow stuff with a bit of ac/dc you shook me all night long thrown in a good band I like though I dont go to concerts dont get out the house much plus skint so I do all my listening on spottily its class download as much as you like play offline but you cant own the music it just down loads to your spottily platform its cool ... oh aye the band Bruce Springsteen especially the album the river.

reply by Bicpen on 05-Feb-2020

hey DOCTOR in the house not bad Ricky ... they certainly do steal the sky I was just listening to the cover stuff on the web page I looked up ... you writing for them ... keep me informed ... like to know how it goes !!!

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020

I was in a mental hospital from a nervous breakdown I met this man named Bob Ricci.
You got a mansion in cape May his deal was he was in charge of South Jersey entertainment for 30 years.
He retired but had a nervous breakdown because they wouldn't leave him alone!
when he gave me his number after I wrote him a song after I first wrote him a poem and he said could you do a song he was impressed.
He signed it with his name and a piano underneath!
I found out later that he was Christina Ricci the actress's uncle but they didn't get along
He said can you write it out of my sit in the in one hour!
And, he was amazed.
he gave me his private number told me how to unlock it and then he was flying a band in the meet me at Bally's hotel casino Atlantic City.
Every time I called I either didn't get an answer I left a message and he never ever return the favor.
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Since he was from Asbury Park many years ago he met a young and upcoming artist.
the artist wanted to be known and had contacted him and he told him no!
that artist today is known as Bruce Springsteen!
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30 years I've written some songs for bands that I enjoyed like Madonna.
"Almost an Angel.
Aerosmith.
"You can't get Blood from a stone's
Dolly Parton
"Just Dolly"
Aerosmith was coming to the revel hotel about four years ago then artane I couldn't get comp tickets because it was sold out and I didn't have the money to go.
I did meet a couple very interesting comedians last night.
And the one guy Jeff Lynch I think his last name was.
He was standing outside as we were leaving the Greek people.
I told him a great show he!
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Many many years before when my son was only 8 years old and he's been going on 17 years and he was 18 when he passed,
We were in an elevator Trump plaza Atlantic City which has been closed for 8 years.
Instead of going down the elevator went up?
We went all the way up to the top.
To the Penthouse Sweets and a band member from a group I just seen got on with his luggage.
his luggage had stickers on it from all over the world.
Did not say one word to him not only when we were in the elevator or or ask for his autograph book when we were leaving.
As I walk past Ivanka Trump's jewelry store and stopped and looked he did!
Discontinued for a few minutes.
Finally I said this to him...
'Are you following me?'
And great show last night Huey!'
Huey Lewis and the News!
He's very short!
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about what we do on this earth should be to glorify God. You used very good descriptive and heart felt words. Thank you for sharing my friend. May God bless you! Teri

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Thank you forever Teri!
Ricky.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

That's what we have to do to finish our task in life, stay close to Him! What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture! Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020

Well, it looks like I got a new fan?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024