Out of the Ashes
5-7-5 on a mythological creature10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Mythological 5-7-5 poem about the phoenix that rises from the ashes and living once more eternally like love in our hearts that never die.
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A very well-written Mythological 5-7-5 poem about the phoenix that rises from the ashes and living once more eternally like love in our hearts that never die.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your lovely comments!
Comment from BeasPeas
Great job on this mythological creature poem, illustrated nicely. Word choices and relation to love being eternal is excellent. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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Great job on this mythological creature poem, illustrated nicely. Word choices and relation to love being eternal is excellent. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights!
Comment from Bicpen
Classic simple straight to the point with the question burning and exclamation stirring ... it brings the picture into a perspective with a connection with the piece and deliberates on the existence or eternal hope and questions life after the resurrection. Possibly it could be tidied up to give a fuller visual impact by making the background black and having the font still red this would induce the fire breathing hope and desire worthy of a winning piece.
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Classic simple straight to the point with the question burning and exclamation stirring ... it brings the picture into a perspective with a connection with the piece and deliberates on the existence or eternal hope and questions life after the resurrection. Possibly it could be tidied up to give a fuller visual impact by making the background black and having the font still red this would induce the fire breathing hope and desire worthy of a winning piece.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Great suggestion. Not all that great with graphics as I am with words! But will give it a shot...thanks for dropping by to share your insights on this piece.
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It'll look cool ...
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You're right. It does!
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good for you ...
Comment from Minglement
This is a stunning entry for the contest. Perfect choice for a subject and his story well told with a bonus - a reference to love him being eternal - like love. A lot of ground covered in so few syllables, with great artwork. Well done.
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This is a stunning entry for the contest. Perfect choice for a subject and his story well told with a bonus - a reference to love him being eternal - like love. A lot of ground covered in so few syllables, with great artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights and for the generous rating!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 mythical creature poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have told a very nice message about how love never dies, but will rise again. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a great entry for the 575 mythical creature poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. You have told a very nice message about how love never dies, but will rise again. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Phoniex"
Is a 5-7-5 mythological creature writing prompt entry
Rich in Theme and Imagery it also, read well and Flowed with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional whilee, Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks and good luck with this!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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"Phoniex"
Is a 5-7-5 mythological creature writing prompt entry
Rich in Theme and Imagery it also, read well and Flowed with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional whilee, Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks and good luck with this!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughtful review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The rising of the phoenix and there is something euphoric about this statement, eternal love in the same context gives your poem much power, I enjoyed your write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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The rising of the phoenix and there is something euphoric about this statement, eternal love in the same context gives your poem much power, I enjoyed your write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you liked this short one. Love is eternal and can survive the worst and be revived again
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
good presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration.
-I like the comparison
between the Phoenix and
"eternal love."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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-Great artwork and
good presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration.
-I like the comparison
between the Phoenix and
"eternal love."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you liked this short one. Love is eternal and can survive the worst and be revived again
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You are welcome. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
I very much enjoyed your well written short poem. It is very expressive and the presentation is appealing to the eyes and the words are inspiring. A truly nice small package. Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Agnes
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I very much enjoyed your well written short poem. It is very expressive and the presentation is appealing to the eyes and the words are inspiring. A truly nice small package. Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Agnes
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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So glad you liked this piece! Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
Many will relate to the image of the phoenix rising
and your words connecting to eternal love.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
Many will relate to the image of the phoenix rising
and your words connecting to eternal love.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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So glad you liked this piece! Thank you for sharing your insights.