Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Aiona,
Sounds like a second marriage after a death of a spouse. It shows that chilcren are a big reason to try love and mariage again. I hope love is
also a reason here for this marriage. Sounds like one of these people were not sure about getting married in the beginning.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Yes, thanks, Joan.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Aiona,

You selected a perfect image to accompany your contest entry. Sometimes a chance meeting will lead to a couple getting together to enjoy their lives together. I guess the bird-messaging service works for these lovebirds.

Mark

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thanks, Mark.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I gave you my address last month
Just wanted some help with my son
Kept you at bay
"Love? No, not today."
But now we are two become one.

A little confusing for me, but then I have a problem of making things complicated. The last line, seems different. But I do agree, love comes unexpectedly.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Yes, it is a bit awkward. I was trying ineffectually to keep within the parameters of the contest requirements. It definitely needs re-working.