Word Woven Tapestries
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Wings in the Wind"A collection of poems which tell a story.
4 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
I really enjoyed this! You are so talented my friend. I have another friend that writes poetry, and between you two, there is not another person that moves me the way your words do. My favorite part: Night again will reclaim its hold: that's when the end of time will then unfold; for when I hear a fluttering of wings in the wind I'll watch while an angel assembly descends.
Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I really enjoyed this! You are so talented my friend. I have another friend that writes poetry, and between you two, there is not another person that moves me the way your words do. My favorite part: Night again will reclaim its hold: that's when the end of time will then unfold; for when I hear a fluttering of wings in the wind I'll watch while an angel assembly descends.
Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing,
Shana :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Really appreciate you, Shana, my friend. Thanks ever so much!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow excellently done in rhyme and flow. You took us through the essence of mankinds existence by using the reference to a day. Excellent content and wording
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Wow excellently done in rhyme and flow. You took us through the essence of mankinds existence by using the reference to a day. Excellent content and wording
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I so ever respect your comments and appreciate your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the warm peaceful sentiments here and your rhymes, the flow is a little disrupted and uneven, but your words are well chosen and your message is clear, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I loved the warm peaceful sentiments here and your rhymes, the flow is a little disrupted and uneven, but your words are well chosen and your message is clear, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your review. Appreciate your comments. I do agree about the unevenness at times.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... both thought-provoking and ethereal here - love the imaginings and then the reality focus that your aabbCC rhyme scheme create! :) That CC repetition does a wonderful job in completing your 'web of images' for the reader -- thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Wow... both thought-provoking and ethereal here - love the imaginings and then the reality focus that your aabbCC rhyme scheme create! :) That CC repetition does a wonderful job in completing your 'web of images' for the reader -- thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you. Your review means a great deal to me and I appreciate your comments.