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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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The shadows of the holidays seems to loom large for those that have lost greatly... the mask we hide behind throughout the year becomes to heavy to hide the small tears we hold back... tears that hold all the sorrow we choose not to show the world.. A wonderfully sad offering, Doc, but well done -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    Thanks again Yvette.
    You know I lost my son and my wife but I have four daughters.
    I always hang out basically with my youngest and her son. So, I spent Christmas Eve and enjoyed the Christmas morning opening.
    Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Only beloved son Jason died in 2003, within every human drop of tears, you still find one of yours, an unknown fear trapped in your tears, the demon inside plagues and comes thru tears; well said, well done; visit profile; thanks for sharing this, wish you a happy New Year 2020!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    Thanks again.
    Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We often bear the tears of loss within and even if they are not shed outwardly, they are felt deep within our hearts. Over time we learn to mask our fears and sorrow on the outside, but inside we are sometimes haunted by the tragedies we have suffered, I could identify with your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
    Thanks Dolly and always a pleasure. Enjoy this up-and-coming New Year holiday.
    Ricky