Comment from susand3022

Excellent

What are you doing Aiona.... sitting back in a Panera??? Sure looks that way to me! I don't think we can call that sailing food... you'll spill the soup as soon as you hit a swell! :) a fun poem :)

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020

LOL! My husband cooks well. I don't cook on the boat. I have a Foreman grill but haven't used it yet because I've been so busy just working on the engine. My stereo is my next priority! Thanks for the review, Susan.

reply by susand3022 on 05-Jan-2020

You need an instant pot! LOL

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Sounds pretty yummy and a fine partnership effort. We quite often have broccoli with a cheese sauce, but I don't think I've had it as a soup before. If you've got the recipe at hand, I wouldn't mind trying it.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020

Sure! I will message it to you when my husband wakes up. He's the one with the recipe.

Comment from Dancemom

Excellent

This is a cute 577 poem with a good message. Each person has their own gifts and complement each other making a team. The only issue I see is that I think broccoli is three syllables making that line eight syllables. (I personally pronounce broccoli as two). Great job and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020

LOL!!!!! You know, I had that same problem when I used "chocolate" in a syllable-restricted poem too! Thanks, Heather.