LOVE OF NATURE
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Sky Ballet"Eclectic
15 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What a fascinating picture and poem! I was wondering why you were writing about sky and birds and then I realized the shape in the photo was birds. It's almost like God was sketching on the sky with living creatures. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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What a fascinating picture and poem! I was wondering why you were writing about sky and birds and then I realized the shape in the photo was birds. It's almost like God was sketching on the sky with living creatures. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Yes! Thanks for your positive review, Happy New Year,hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome.
Comment from royowen
I just love your descriptive imagery that you've creatively written in this highly language rich post dear friend. You've painted a canvas like none other with a cleverly sculpted work. Beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I just love your descriptive imagery that you've creatively written in this highly language rich post dear friend. You've painted a canvas like none other with a cleverly sculpted work. Beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Roy, reviews from you are always so welcome. You honor my work
Blessings, Happy New Year.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from susand3022
Hello, Bucketlist... I still can't see the bell... I can totally see a heart though! That's kind of Christmasy too if you ask me. Why wait until February to fill the world with love? Nice poem :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Hello, Bucketlist... I still can't see the bell... I can totally see a heart though! That's kind of Christmasy too if you ask me. Why wait until February to fill the world with love? Nice poem :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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You saw a hear, another saw a hat, I saw a bell......fascinating the different perceptions! Thanks for your positive review, Happy New Year,hugs, Trisha
Comment from glindaboy52
Very poignant in the metaphors described. The birds become the individual brushstrokes across the ever changing lifeful sky. I love the line wright brothers inspired. The flow is very nice and unfolds nicely!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Very poignant in the metaphors described. The birds become the individual brushstrokes across the ever changing lifeful sky. I love the line wright brothers inspired. The flow is very nice and unfolds nicely!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I appreciate your kind review, and your honor of six stars
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like the title that you have chosen for this one, Trisha. Birds do seem to use the sky as their dance floor. The sunrises and sunsets provide the incredible backdrop for their dance formations. It's nice to think that they dance their choreography for the divine, as we should be entertaining God here on earth.
I enjoyed this one. I hope you had a lovely Christmas.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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I like the title that you have chosen for this one, Trisha. Birds do seem to use the sky as their dance floor. The sunrises and sunsets provide the incredible backdrop for their dance formations. It's nice to think that they dance their choreography for the divine, as we should be entertaining God here on earth.
I enjoyed this one. I hope you had a lovely Christmas.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Debbie,Thank you very much for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from rspoet
Hello Trisha,
You've written a excellent poem of those wonderful sky ballets
It is amazing and amusing to watch the clouds and birds
shape and reshape in the that great sky canvas.
Very good imagery and art work
Nicely done
Have a wonderful new year
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Hello Trisha,
You've written a excellent poem of those wonderful sky ballets
It is amazing and amusing to watch the clouds and birds
shape and reshape in the that great sky canvas.
Very good imagery and art work
Nicely done
Have a wonderful new year
Robert
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
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Hi Robert, I am honored that you enjoyed my poem.Thank you for a great review. Health and peace for 2020
Hu, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
Trish, This is a very interesting and very well written free verse poem you have penned for the Free Verse event about the Sky ballet. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Trish, This is a very interesting and very well written free verse poem you have penned for the Free Verse event about the Sky ballet. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Teri, thank you for your complimentary review. I?m glad to share nature?s beauty.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a wonderful free verse poem. Thinking of the sky as God's canvas is a really beautiful thought, especially when you think of all the colors and sites we see on that canvas. A beautiful image is also created by the Idea of the birds swooping and swirling, all kinds and colors. This is a lovely poem and it is presented beautifully. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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This is a wonderful free verse poem. Thinking of the sky as God's canvas is a really beautiful thought, especially when you think of all the colors and sites we see on that canvas. A beautiful image is also created by the Idea of the birds swooping and swirling, all kinds and colors. This is a lovely poem and it is presented beautifully. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Your review is so complimentary thank you. You?re welcome, and I?m glad you enjoyed reading it
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the sky ballerinas who put up a spectacular show when they come together and paint and artistic picture.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about the sky ballerinas who put up a spectacular show when they come together and paint and artistic picture.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thanks Sandra!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thank is an amazing image and your words describe the scene so perfectly. Sky ballet is a great way of describing this formation of birds in flight, a magical poem, you captured this scene in words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank is an amazing image and your words describe the scene so perfectly. Sky ballet is a great way of describing this formation of birds in flight, a magical poem, you captured this scene in words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thanks, it?s an amazing wonder of nature. I?d never seen anything like it before. There are other shapes too . Many thanks for Your kind review
Hugs, Trisha