Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This humorous 5-7-5, Family Holiday Dinner, has the right set up and cast the annual feast in a bad light. "See you next year unless you die."

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019

Thank you:)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Few words but your meaning hit my core as different personalities can sometimes clash over dinner and the conversations can be heated! Relief when they leave, but you said all this with just 10 words, magical, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019

Thank you:)

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this timely piece. Gee, it they're going to be a pain in the butt, they could at least bring some of the food! :-)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019

Thank you:)

Comment from lauralumummu

Excellent

Lol, my dad always said he was happy to see them come and happy to see them go. Some family dinners can be challenging. The turkey is mad.
Great entry for the contest, haiku 5-7-5. All the best, Laura.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019

Thank you:)