Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A 5-7-5 with mono-rhyme as well as a suitable theme for this winter season. Is the rhyme the feature that gives it the name of 'Live 5-7-5'? I as k because i have not come across the term before.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

HELLO, PANTYGYNT: Thank you for complementing on my poem. You are appreciated. The term, "A LIVE 5-7-5," is a term that I made up to perk up my 5-7-5, poems. I use the term with all of my 5-7-5. poems. Thank you for asking. God bless you, Pantygynt. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice poem, I enjoyed it a lot. It is short but has a clear message and I like the flow of the last line. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

HELLO OLIVER818: Thank you. Thank you. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

what a snow-like image of a snow girl. I can honestly say we are getting lots of snow here this week; something which will make the roads hazardous. Children do like snow though; but when you get older it can stay away.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019

HELLO ROSEMARY: Thank you. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.