Lead Pencil
Free Verse Poem11 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your free verse poem and your most gifted object you chose to write about is interesting and different. Most people wouldn't pick a writing pen. That's what makes your poem unique and that is why I like it. Your poem flows well and it is clear and straight to the point. Your artwork choice enhances your message. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Your free verse poem and your most gifted object you chose to write about is interesting and different. Most people wouldn't pick a writing pen. That's what makes your poem unique and that is why I like it. Your poem flows well and it is clear and straight to the point. Your artwork choice enhances your message. Best wishes!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks! Thank you for the encouragement! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It sounds like you have the kind of love for your pencil that I had for my books. I was obsessed with reading. I had so many books that I would read them two or three at a time. It pained me when I had so many that I had to get rid of some. Thanks for sharing this well thought out and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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It sounds like you have the kind of love for your pencil that I had for my books. I was obsessed with reading. I had so many books that I would read them two or three at a time. It pained me when I had so many that I had to get rid of some. Thanks for sharing this well thought out and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from jaded831
I definitely can relate, a great theme, very true for everyone at this site. Great entry, your poem flows. Every word skillfully planted to grow into a work of art. I have to read everything before casting a vote. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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I definitely can relate, a great theme, very true for everyone at this site. Great entry, your poem flows. Every word skillfully planted to grow into a work of art. I have to read everything before casting a vote. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks! Thank you for the compliment! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This is very good! It makes me want to buy you a pack of such pencils. You have a way of making an everyday object very special indeed! With such utensils you will never run out of words.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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This is very good! It makes me want to buy you a pack of such pencils. You have a way of making an everyday object very special indeed! With such utensils you will never run out of words.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is an excellent poem about lead pencils. (you have it spelled led which is not correct). You have written what these pencils have done for
you.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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This is an excellent poem about lead pencils. (you have it spelled led which is not correct). You have written what these pencils have done for
you.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks! It is spelled correctly. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for the visit! :)
Comment from Supe
led is not spelled correctly. Should be lead.
I keep typing, 'cause of that darn special pencil
paper afloat, (not a period)
This is a nice flowing piece and I enjoyed it and the presentation. Very nice free verse.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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led is not spelled correctly. Should be lead.
I keep typing, 'cause of that darn special pencil
paper afloat, (not a period)
This is a nice flowing piece and I enjoyed it and the presentation. Very nice free verse.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thank you, my friend! I have fixed the mistakes. You can check it again. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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I gave you a 5.
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Thank you! :)
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you are welcome.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
It gave me a writer's profession - that led pencil and a pad of paper, and you're all set! My hand doesn't press as hard any more, I need a good clear black pen for handwriting (if we are handwriting and not just printing). But the dream is the same. Before I set out, let me get pen and p aper!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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It gave me a writer's profession - that led pencil and a pad of paper, and you're all set! My hand doesn't press as hard any more, I need a good clear black pen for handwriting (if we are handwriting and not just printing). But the dream is the same. Before I set out, let me get pen and p aper!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Yes, I did! You're welcome.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Let us say that of all the tools at our disposal the pencil will never leave first-place. A worthy treatise about the importance of a very undervalued tool.
PS: Don't forget the eraser.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Let us say that of all the tools at our disposal the pencil will never leave first-place. A worthy treatise about the importance of a very undervalued tool.
PS: Don't forget the eraser.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Yes, we couldn't do a thing without a led pencil. I like to erase when their are mistakes. It's also fun to sharpen when needed. To write with it bring many moments of happiness, pleasures.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Yes, we couldn't do a thing without a led pencil. I like to erase when their are mistakes. It's also fun to sharpen when needed. To write with it bring many moments of happiness, pleasures.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about writing with a favorite pencil that opens up the imagination and the muse are willing to share his amazing ideas with you to write it all down.
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about writing with a favorite pencil that opens up the imagination and the muse are willing to share his amazing ideas with you to write it all down.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!