Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yours is a relaxing, imagery-filled contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. You presented it well, too. Thanks for haring and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

Thank you.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A lovely pairing of photo and poem.
Line 1 sets the scene and establishes the atmosphere.
Good personification in line 2 where nature breathes and sighs.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

Thank you.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, my! Your offering just makes your reader want to stop and take a deep relaxing breath -- well done! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019

Thank you.