Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I think it is good to be reminded of retribution as a force of punishment in our lives - keeps us aware that actions have consequences. Karma can be good consequences - so much better to attract good attention and reward than having to face our nemesis: our inescapable downfall for evil deeds.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019

I agree, I cannot do dishonest stuff. I prefer to sleep peacefully.
I remember once in Zanzibar, I received money from my husband at a western union kind of shop, very sweet people. I then realized that she had given me 100 $ too much. I was so broke and it was tempting, but I went back the next day to give the money back, but she insisted that it was right, Okaaaay.
I don't lie either because it is just too hard to keep the stories straight, ha ha.
Thanks for the review, cheers.

reply by LisaMay on 08-Nov-2019

Good values never go astray, but shonky behaviour and lies will certainly lead us astray.

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019

Shonky, haha

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

I always think of the Agatha Christie book... I think you might need an apostrophe after Nemesis, because it's her revenge... and if it's simply that you're equating the two, a semi colon between them.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Thanks for the review and advice. I changed it. I do like the prompts where we must research and learn something new. Cheers.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet a terrific Thursday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Cheers, thanks for the review. I do like a prompt where there is some research involved. I always learn a little more.
Hope all is well with you.