Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Hey, Sparrow, you got a minute to spare with an old friend just hanging in there? Wish I could talk to my friends with your flair so debonair. I'm sure God heard you, LisaMay. I believes He reads your writings and He forgives you for all the boyfriends you have had. Have a beautiful day. :)

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

I am pleased to hear that you think God will forgive me for my chequered past in the game of romance. Some of my 'boyfriends' won't!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Dear God contest.
Your story is well told and heartfelt.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Sorry for my delay in responding - I was away. I very much appreciate your review.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello mystery writer. Clearly you have placed your essay as a conversational prayer. There is a formal prayer when I also engaging conversational prayer with him. It is what is truly on my heart when I pray. I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019

Thanks Robert - it sounds like we both like talking with God.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 31-Oct-2019

Every day...

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this talk with God that you've penned here. You've constructed it in such a way that it sounds like your talking to a friend. He's not only our God and the King and Lord of all, but, He is indeed our friend. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019

Thanks for this lovely review. I feel that God is very approachable, so I wrote my letter with that tone.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this very friendly and down-to-earth letter to God as your friend. You definitely focused on the main point of a living relationship with God who loves us perfectly.
Bill

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review. God and I have quite a few chats, so I am on chummy terms with him; with no disrespect.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

A marvelous Monday to you fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thank you!

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

I love this warm, intensely personal, slightly offbeat conversation with God. God has heard and will respond to you, personally, whatever your situation is. Amen!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

I trust in the Lord. I've always felt He has a sense of humour so I wrote this in an informal, friendly style.
Thanks for reviewing.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 28-Oct-2019

It was my pleasure. You're welcome.

Comment from tim dodd

Excellent

thats simple and beautiful and that you
asked for help for others and didn't get selfish
well done I would say. Almost heart felt.
But you only skimmed the surface. Sometimes thats
best again well done.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review Tim. I did not want to load God down with a lengthy letter - or readers with a long story.
I think God would appreciate a sense of humour from time to time so I didn't want to start whining.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a lovely letter to God, my friend. It is sweet that you are worried about Him rather than the other way around, as it usually is. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

I think God has a sense of humour, so I wrote it with a light touch.
Thanks for your review.