In the Dark of Night
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "'Neath a Full Moon"Poems and stories about urban legends.
4 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
An age old story told exceptionally well in each stanza. Introducing the problem, the bad and the good, the battle to the end under the full moon. Could refer to more than a battle between man and beast. Excellent rhyme and flow
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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An age old story told exceptionally well in each stanza. Introducing the problem, the bad and the good, the battle to the end under the full moon. Could refer to more than a battle between man and beast. Excellent rhyme and flow
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thank you ever so much for your kind review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from scongrove
This is now one of my favorites! Great writing my friend. It gave me goosebumps! You have a fantastic imagination for sure. Love this one! The artwork is a great choice too!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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This is now one of my favorites! Great writing my friend. It gave me goosebumps! You have a fantastic imagination for sure. Love this one! The artwork is a great choice too!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thank you, my friend, Shana. It is an honor having you to have commented as such. Truly appreciate the six stars. It's not up with yours, but I am working on at least poetic stories dealing with such.
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You have a true talent my friend. I was blown away by your writing. Fantastic job!
Comment from Sally Law
Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very well done and you succeeded in scaring me to death--again. A six star rhyming offering, dear Faye.
I'm afraid to go outside....
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very well done and you succeeded in scaring me to death--again. A six star rhyming offering, dear Faye.
I'm afraid to go outside....
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thank you ever so much, my dear friend, Sally, for the review and the six stars. I was hoping that it would sound like something that would fit into Halloween.
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You are very versatile and creative, too. XO
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Thank you, and I send my best in return. XO
Comment from Barbaraj1
Your poem is excellent. The words flow nicely. Your rhyming is excellent.
A scary poem that unveils itself under a full moon. Your imagery
is realistic.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Your poem is excellent. The words flow nicely. Your rhyming is excellent.
A scary poem that unveils itself under a full moon. Your imagery
is realistic.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thank you ever so much. I very much appreciate your kind review.