The Soul Of A Human Being
freestyle poem8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice, indeed. You've written a piece about the soul and how it integrates with our mind and body. Some good lines within which resonated with me:
And that being was born to love
And be loved in return.
This happens when the stars align
To bring matching personalities together;
Mind, body and soul.
AND
God damned us to think for ourselves,
And become one with another,
In the same way, but different.
Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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This is very nice, indeed. You've written a piece about the soul and how it integrates with our mind and body. Some good lines within which resonated with me:
And that being was born to love
And be loved in return.
This happens when the stars align
To bring matching personalities together;
Mind, body and soul.
AND
God damned us to think for ourselves,
And become one with another,
In the same way, but different.
Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi again. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Some emotions feel natural,
But...
Many times,
They are nurtured;
I like the nurtured part as it is so very true. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Some emotions feel natural,
But...
Many times,
They are nurtured;
I like the nurtured part as it is so very true. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi Debbie! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Soul of a Human Being"
"Is a Soul Writer Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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"The Soul of a Human Being"
"Is a Soul Writer Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
...
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hi! You're funny. And a very nice person too. Thank you. :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Soul Writer contest.
You nicely describe the frailty and strength of the soul.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Soul Writer contest.
You nicely describe the frailty and strength of the soul.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from papa55mike
I've read several of these entries today, and I like this one a lot. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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I've read several of these entries today, and I like this one a lot. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, you just keep right on 'just writing'... ;) :) A beautiful testimony of belief from the superficial to deeply faithful -- wonderful offering for this contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Well, you just keep right on 'just writing'... ;) :) A beautiful testimony of belief from the superficial to deeply faithful -- wonderful offering for this contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from JLR
A very strong entry to the soul writer contest. You depict the defined expression of soul quite eloquently, strong free verse presentation with excellent meter. You should be voted strongly in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A very strong entry to the soul writer contest. You depict the defined expression of soul quite eloquently, strong free verse presentation with excellent meter. You should be voted strongly in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You're very nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Explaining what a soul is can be difficult because we cannot see the soul, it is a feeling we have about someone, their presence, their life that lives on beyond the grave. Mind, body and soul within us all. I enjoyed your interpretation here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Explaining what a soul is can be difficult because we cannot see the soul, it is a feeling we have about someone, their presence, their life that lives on beyond the grave. Mind, body and soul within us all. I enjoyed your interpretation here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hi Dolly! Thank you. God bless you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)