Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A majestic offering of the 5-7-5 and I love the photo art you chose to go with it. This looks like a winner to me for the upcoming contest. Syllable count is spot on, too. ;)
Sending you my best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019

Thank you ever so much for the review, kind comments and best wishes for the contest.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Love the great play on words. Did you know the female does the hunting while he waits to feast? A great entry to the 5-7-5 contest, very nicely done....

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your review. and yes, I do know that the female does the hunting.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello FM!
Wonderful play on words! I smiled when I read the last line! The "King of Beasts" is such a magnificent animal! Pleasure to read!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

Thank you ever so much for reviewing. I'm certainly glad that you liked it and even brought a smile to your face.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Faye, I enjoyed this fun play on words. Your short 5-7-5 is cute and a very appropriate entry for the contest. I wish you luck!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

Thank you ever so much for the review and the good luck wish.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have used all of your syllables effectively to convey a message about
the magnificent lion, king of beasts and arrogantly aware of the fact.
Clever third line

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

I am most grateful for your review. Most assuredly appreciated.