"Beautiful!"
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Candy Coat Your Dreams"Poetry at it's finest.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Excellent advice for life, my friend! It is important to nurture and savor each and every dream as you never know which ones are the divine inspiration needed to complete on mission here on earth. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Excellent advice for life, my friend! It is important to nurture and savor each and every dream as you never know which ones are the divine inspiration needed to complete on mission here on earth. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Most of my dreams are seldom, horrible...
Mostly different?
Weird?
Errie?
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My sons did just this and you said it so well. I know they are with God and waiting for me to come and dance with them. Thank you for reminding me of the glory
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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My sons did just this and you said it so well. I know they are with God and waiting for me to come and dance with them. Thank you for reminding me of the glory
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Hope this didn't bring back unpleasant memories?
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a very touching tribute to your son. It must have been heartbreaking to endure. However, it appears that your faith will see you through. Sometimes the spiritual approach is the only one to turn to.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This is a very touching tribute to your son. It must have been heartbreaking to endure. However, it appears that your faith will see you through. Sometimes the spiritual approach is the only one to turn to.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your caring Review.
Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
Candy Coat Your Dreams is a powerful title; most will be able to relate to the synthetic belief of wanting the best of any situation {thumbs up}.
The theme of "Home" is equally powerful. It taps into a cultural sense of belonging and safety. That's why these lines are especially poignant:
"Away to a better Place...
"And, you'll be back home soon...
You've penned an effect piece with inherent emotional strength {smiles}.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Candy Coat Your Dreams is a powerful title; most will be able to relate to the synthetic belief of wanting the best of any situation {thumbs up}.
The theme of "Home" is equally powerful. It taps into a cultural sense of belonging and safety. That's why these lines are especially poignant:
"Away to a better Place...
"And, you'll be back home soon...
You've penned an effect piece with inherent emotional strength {smiles}.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks again Alex for your Wonderful review.
RIcky