Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You leave us hanging as we have yet to learn whether the action is completed. This is well penned and a delightful read. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019

Thanks It will be completed after breakfast.
Eastern Standard Time.
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A tale for our times, or half a one at least. You leave us on the brink of adventure, thirsting for what comes out of the soft drink factory. Is it to be Pepsi Cola or Coca Cola? Will it fizz?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019

Nice review but soon...
The 'Bubbling"
Will begin!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky Likes Pepsi 1024

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

I like how you use the narrative to demonstrate an interplay between Ricky, the author, and Annie, the narrator". That's well crafted {smiles}.

I just picked up on one point that you might like to consider:

Once upon a Time, lost with in my Human Mind? -- Spag? In this contest, I think you mean "within" instead of "with in".

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019

Thanks and when I complete.
Thanks I'll fix the spag.
When you lutterally write millions of words a year?
It's bound to happen.
Doctor Ricky 1024