Comment from Sandra Ludwick

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading future chapters. You kept the reader interested throughout. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks. I hope you will stay tuned for more dragons.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

good day or evening to you . Cindy Warren
Very good writing Cindy, you kept my interest, and now I will be waiting to find out the dragon from the pink egg is like,and I'm wondering if The red dragon stops being so aggressive.
Gert

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019

Thanks. Some of your questions are answered in the chapter I just posted. Hope you will enjoy that one too

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Oct-2019

You are welcome Cindy Warren
Gert

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Cindy. I'm not familiar with your story, but I'm impressed with the detail and fascinated by the descriptions and topic of dragons and interacting with them. Well written and clear. Interesting that the sibling told Aaron he could release the sister now that she'd been born and no longer had to fear being killed. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. You didn't miss all that much. Aaron has found the eggs, and they're hatching into very different dragons with distinctive personalities. I hope Aaron will be an interesting character too. I think there's one chapter still paying.

Comment from Adri7enne

Exceptional

Fascinating story, Cindy. And such great pictures. That little pink dragon is adorable. I think she's going to tame the red dragon. You're doing a great job developing this story. It has cohesion and lots of interesting characters. And you're a good writer. Spag free and nice, flowing language. Good job, girl.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019

Thanks! More on the pink dragon later today, or first thing tomorrow. Glad you're enjoying it so much.

Comment from Susan Morritt

Excellent

This story, once again, was a fascinating read. I hung on every word as the tale unfolded, and hope to continue following the saga of these dragons. You certainly have a knack for story-telling. Your dialogue is believable and natural, and your descriptions vivid but not overwhelming. Thank you for posting this!

Susan

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019

Thanks. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Exceptional

I am so enjoying this wonderful story! I just love how you are developing these beautiful characters. I can't wait for the true personality reveal for the pink dragon. Thank you for writing such an entertaining story! xoxo

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019

Thanks! I'm thrilled you're enjoying it so much.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 30-Sep-2019

Captivating!!!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your chapter, Cindy. Them lies read smoothly. They are filled with great descriptive, imagery creating words. I could picture the events as I read them. The discussion with the ghost was interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks. So glad you're continuing to enjoy the story.

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Reading this as a stand-alone chapter, I was pleasantly surprised at the quality of the write. Seems that this is shaping up to be a mesmerizing tale. Dragons are hot (sic) right now but I have always enjoyed this kind of fantasy.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Hope you will stay tuned and continue to enjoy.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

The red one is definitely a little devil. It seems the pink one knows she can handle her. We can only hope.

I'm worried about Aaron being discovered and punished for his part in this. Here's hoping the 'voice' will guide him through and keep him safe.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks. We couldn't have Aaron's life get boring, could we? Don't worry, he'll be OK in the end.

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

You have me hooked with this tale. I shall have to go back to read more of the early chapters, to get up to speed. Your descriptions and characterisation are first class. I'm really enjoying this story a lot.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks for the six! I hope you will keep enjoying it. And it's great to have you as a fan.