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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Ricky
The title of your writing (Dying to Get to Know You?
that it would end with a sad ending,---

On the right hand side where the accident happened?
You can still see Bobby and Molly watching the outdoor movie?

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thanks Gert.
    Have a nice Tuesday.
    Ricky
reply by Gert sherwood on 10-Sep-2019
    You are welcome Ricky
    Gert
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
reply by Gert sherwood on 13-Sep-2019
    Got it Ricky TY
    Gert
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That's so sad for Bobby and Molly. Bobby shouldn't have taken the car, but he still didn't deserve to be killed. I hope the drunk driver paid for what he did.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thanks Cindy,
    And every day there's a Molly and Bobby out there in the United States.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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WoW! You deliver a well penned ghost story in grand manner, my friend. It progresses in a fluid and logical manner holding the reader's attention from beginning to end. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thanks Angel,
    But every day in the United States is always going to be a situation like that with your Bobby and Molly.
    Ricky