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Viewing comments for Chapter 343 "Esoteric Goddess "Eclectic style
6 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely Moon Goddess in artwork and with your beautifully descriptive Nocturna poem Trisha. You tell the turning of day to night in a very peaceful way despite - when darkness brings fears
Lovely read,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Lovely Moon Goddess in artwork and with your beautifully descriptive Nocturna poem Trisha. You tell the turning of day to night in a very peaceful way despite - when darkness brings fears
Lovely read,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a cool form... only about the night! :) I've read another from this club and I'm definitely gonna give it a try... later... when I'm caught up! ;):) LOL! :) I do like your offering for a very unique reason, Trisha -- you've given such a wonderful picture of the deities and celestial bodies.... all with Night covering with her sheets! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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What a cool form... only about the night! :) I've read another from this club and I'm definitely gonna give it a try... later... when I'm caught up! ;):) LOL! :) I do like your offering for a very unique reason, Trisha -- you've given such a wonderful picture of the deities and celestial bodies.... all with Night covering with her sheets! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Glad it titivated you Yvonne Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I'm raising the rating to a five. Thank you for being gracious about my suggestion. It's a lovely poem with good meter and rhyme. Lovely presentation.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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I'm raising the rating to a five. Thank you for being gracious about my suggestion. It's a lovely poem with good meter and rhyme. Lovely presentation.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Okay, I took your help, hopefully for the better! Thanks for reviewing kindly
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Cheryl I
I enjoyed reading your poem. I read about the Nocturna, what you posted. It says it should rhyme, so I am confused. Perhaps I misunderstood the form description. Either way, I loved your poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I read about the Nocturna, what you posted. It says it should rhyme, so I am confused. Perhaps I misunderstood the form description. Either way, I loved your poem. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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array, way, d are my rhyming words. It is the three center lines which need to rhyme. I hope this helps, thanks for reviewing kindly
Hugs, Trisha
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Oh, I see. Thanks for clearing that up for me. Very nice! Cheryl
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This a beautifully penned piece, my friend. The rhyme and meter are subtle and fluid throughout. The content is placid and soothing like the moon itself. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This a beautifully penned piece, my friend. The rhyme and meter are subtle and fluid throughout. The content is placid and soothing like the moon itself. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks for an excellent review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely little piece and the picture you chose complements it well. It surely meets the contest criteria. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the judging and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely little piece and the picture you chose complements it well. It surely meets the contest criteria. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the judging and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha