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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow... written in 1963... what a wonderful 'flashback offering' here, Doc Ricky! And a grandson named Alexander? I can't wait to read more... thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Just completed now you vote go for it.
    Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely story with a beautiful photograph to compliment it. I hope the balloon ride wish comes true since it is a truly amazing experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Why thanks!
    I difnt think the post was accepted.
    Ricky
Comment from Graybærd
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I am not going to pretend to be someone who is a professional writer. Someone who will hit you with grammatical errors and such. I'm giving you a five and assuming the whole story is in quotes and it is a grandfathers endless attempt to spend time with a grandson while his daughter always makes excuses why he can't spend time. You convey the fear of him asking very well.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Thanks Greybeard I am honored.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from N. Rabwar
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I found this slice of life both interesting and entertaining. I haven't seen any violence yet and I am not sure where it is going, but I will be sure to read the next installment unless it is to violent.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    It will not be violence but there will be a damn good surprise at the end!
    Ricky
reply by N. Rabwar on 15-Aug-2019
    Good. I look forward to it.