"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "This I Do in Remembrance of You."A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Lulube
Now I'm a bit confused or maybe not. The entire poem was about the New Born King and the surroundings of his arrival, for there would be no more suffering. but the last line, Yes, the suffering of the three. so I take it you are throwing this back at the no more suffering, telling that there still is suffering. I would, however, be made as hell at any scripture at this point. Even though I was raised going to church, sunday school then to the adult morning church till I was about 12 yrs, I cannot give myself completely. I have so many doubts and have had so many bad things happen in my life, I cannot let myself be taken over from what I have had to become to survive. There are other ways to believe in that cover your soul and spirituality, very close but no bible to follow through.
lulube
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Now I'm a bit confused or maybe not. The entire poem was about the New Born King and the surroundings of his arrival, for there would be no more suffering. but the last line, Yes, the suffering of the three. so I take it you are throwing this back at the no more suffering, telling that there still is suffering. I would, however, be made as hell at any scripture at this point. Even though I was raised going to church, sunday school then to the adult morning church till I was about 12 yrs, I cannot give myself completely. I have so many doubts and have had so many bad things happen in my life, I cannot let myself be taken over from what I have had to become to survive. There are other ways to believe in that cover your soul and spirituality, very close but no bible to follow through.
lulube
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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basically this is dedicated piece to my son Jason to donate organs so since he passed away in heaven as the newborn king in my words the three out of four still left below that are alive today no longer suffer of course with his organs thanks for your review darling and have a wonderful weekend.
Ricky
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wonderful pride to know he saved others. No one will want any of me. thxs for the blessing for this weekend, it's a long weekend up here and it's me, my cat and pup, doing yard work till I can't stand up. lol
lulube
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I feel the same way I don't know how old you are I'm going to be 65 in October and I just had to move down everything from my upper bedroom lost cuz I'm moving on the tomorrow the day after and I'm up and down 14 stairs and I'm like sweating like a pig carrying these boxes down praying to God is a moving them step to step back for general trip and fall on my ass! Ricky
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65 yrs in March lol Sweating and puffing and a lot of sit downs in between,
lulube
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is another emotional and beautiful piece! I love the spirit you carry even through your loss. I also live that you share the importance of organ donations and how to get involved in the authors notes. xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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This is another emotional and beautiful piece! I love the spirit you carry even through your loss. I also live that you share the importance of organ donations and how to get involved in the authors notes. xoxo
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Why thanks so very much for this Diana.
Ricky...
(Better stuff coming!)
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looking forward to reading! xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is simply beautiful, Ricky. Your imagery is poignant and uplifting throughout. It is a most elevating and enjoyable reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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This is simply beautiful, Ricky. Your imagery is poignant and uplifting throughout. It is a most elevating and enjoyable reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this.
Ricky....
Comment from Sally Law
So good to see you writing, Ricky. This is your best yet with a healing balm throughout. It does my heart good to read it.
Sending you my best today and six stars,
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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So good to see you writing, Ricky. This is your best yet with a healing balm throughout. It does my heart good to read it.
Sending you my best today and six stars,
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this.
Ricky....
Comment from Earl Corp
This is a great tribute to your son,Jason. My takeaway is bad stuff happens to us but the world keeps turning for us, we can either embrace it or wallow in self pity. From this poem I see you have chosen to embrace it.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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This is a great tribute to your son,Jason. My takeaway is bad stuff happens to us but the world keeps turning for us, we can either embrace it or wallow in self pity. From this poem I see you have chosen to embrace it.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this.
Ricky....
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a beautiful offering for the morning, Ricky, to turn your story into one of beauty and praise of the life you still have and the beauty of the world that continues!! ;) :) Wonderful imagery and thank you so very much for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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What a beautiful offering for the morning, Ricky, to turn your story into one of beauty and praise of the life you still have and the beauty of the world that continues!! ;) :) Wonderful imagery and thank you so very much for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for this.
Ricky....