"Painted Visions"
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "The Hic-Cup?"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from JLR
dear writer, I am so troubled by the small type face in the black backdrop making very difficult to read. What I could pull away from your work was very enjoyable and would like to enjoy the whole of the submission...just a thoughtful concern perhaps others have .
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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dear writer, I am so troubled by the small type face in the black backdrop making very difficult to read. What I could pull away from your work was very enjoyable and would like to enjoy the whole of the submission...just a thoughtful concern perhaps others have .
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Let me fix.
Come back.
Ricky.
Comment from Neonewman
Jesus definitely paid the ultimate sacrafice to save our souls from sin. The artwork you have chosen is simply divine my friend. There are a few areas that need a little editing if you don't mind me saying.
Yes, to teach the word above to all whom woul(would) realize and listen.
Well they hung me a up high on a Rosewood Cross at a placed (place) called...
The (They) insisted that I carry away this heavy wooden cross for what seemed an Eternity.
The sun's (sun) is now setting and up here there is more than just me.
That they put me in a cave and sealed the entrance that day but I got out some how (somehow) way (some way)?
I guess Heavenly Father above whom word I do (remove "do") had spoken...
This is a powerful piece and I hope it reaches many.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Jesus definitely paid the ultimate sacrafice to save our souls from sin. The artwork you have chosen is simply divine my friend. There are a few areas that need a little editing if you don't mind me saying.
Yes, to teach the word above to all whom woul(would) realize and listen.
Well they hung me a up high on a Rosewood Cross at a placed (place) called...
The (They) insisted that I carry away this heavy wooden cross for what seemed an Eternity.
The sun's (sun) is now setting and up here there is more than just me.
That they put me in a cave and sealed the entrance that day but I got out some how (somehow) way (some way)?
I guess Heavenly Father above whom word I do (remove "do") had spoken...
This is a powerful piece and I hope it reaches many.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Corrected and thanks.
Ricky
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My pleasure Ricky. I enjoy your work and watching you grow with fanstory my, friend.
God bless
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, Good poem about God and His word and His spreading of the word and how the news (the word) traveled all over about Him. Simple name you used for HIm, "Bob." He was a simple man, although extraordinary. Dove
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Dear Ricky, Good poem about God and His word and His spreading of the word and how the news (the word) traveled all over about Him. Simple name you used for HIm, "Bob." He was a simple man, although extraordinary. Dove
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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the use of the word Bob actually came from a friend of mine named Billy who thinks he's John the prophet so you go and figure.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a fascinating offering this morning, Doc Ricky, with your naming of the man as 'Bob' but that he seems to be Jesus in his being hung on a cross and bleeding... You always have a great way of presenting things from different perspectives! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Such a fascinating offering this morning, Doc Ricky, with your naming of the man as 'Bob' but that he seems to be Jesus in his being hung on a cross and bleeding... You always have a great way of presenting things from different perspectives! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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I've got a friend whose very very religious is named Billy he said he's met Jesus and the day that he met Jesus ecorse call him by name and Jesus asked him to call him Bob so that's where I got that from wow Billy thinks he's John the prophet of course in states that very very soon everything's going to come to a head and only a thousand people are going to be accepted in the heaven in cape May on the beach so he needs eight fisherman and you made me want so you try to figure all that out I'm still wondering.
Rich
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a beautiful and spiritually uplifting riddle, my friend. You recount the passion splendidly. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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You deliver a beautiful and spiritually uplifting riddle, my friend. You recount the passion splendidly. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Glad that you enjoyed this one Angel dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful story we are all familiar with and you told it here with sensitivity Ricky, such suffering will never be forgotten as man's inhumanity to man continues, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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A faithful story we are all familiar with and you told it here with sensitivity Ricky, such suffering will never be forgotten as man's inhumanity to man continues, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thanks Dolly
Glad you enjoyed.
Ricky