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"Painted Visions"

Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "With Every Last Breath (A)"
A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from Lulube
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A morbid subject but creatively done. If there is an autopsy might as well donate the organs, that is if they are healthy. I cannot be a donor but I have agreed to go where ever for science. good luck with my corpse. lol

lulube

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Thanks.
    Ricky
reply by Lulube on 27-Jul-2019
    welcome

    lulube
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I stopped to peruse this very heartfelt piece of organ donation that saves lives when God sees to stop others. Hit my heart and this one is exceptionally done

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
    Thanks very much I enjoy creating this using my son.
    Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Each life giving organ described lives on in another and so your son lives on too. This is well written and very moving in content. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
    Thanks very much I enjoyed creating this using my son.
    Ricky
Comment from kahpot
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"A caregiver allowing life to stream
To a man whom I shall never mean"
this is probably the best and most unselfish words I have heard, don't get me wrong I enjoyed all of this read but these lines will stick, I love the photo, and you are straight from the heart****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
    Thanks very much I enjoyed creating this using my son.
    Ricky