Poetry NOOK
Viewing comments for Chapter 300 " The Glass"Eclectic style
12 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely message in your wine glass shape poem Trisha and I do like your opening line
Do you share wine, or whine -
great shape and great verse, in a lovely presentation.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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A lovely message in your wine glass shape poem Trisha and I do like your opening line
Do you share wine, or whine -
great shape and great verse, in a lovely presentation.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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I thank you for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a very cool shape poem, Trisha!! :) ;) How long did this take you...it's wonderful!! ;) :) You are now my idol when it comes to these...I'm really not sure I would have the patience to do what you've done with shape, rhyme, and meaning -- AWESOME!! ;) ;) If I had a six, it would be yours! :) ;) Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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What a very cool shape poem, Trisha!! :) ;) How long did this take you...it's wonderful!! ;) :) You are now my idol when it comes to these...I'm really not sure I would have the patience to do what you've done with shape, rhyme, and meaning -- AWESOME!! ;) ;) If I had a six, it would be yours! :) ;) Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Aw, you are too kind. Yes it took me a while to bring the shape and poem together. I?m behind with reviewing and posting. But thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This shape poetry is very nice. I like the image of the tilted wine glass with wine being poured into it. The idea of a shape poem is very clever and your comments in it are thought-provoking. My favorite line is the last one, where you discuss attitude changes. I agree they are made from inside. Your rhymes are interesting and provocative. I especially like, "smothers" and "others" as well as "empty" and "plenty." I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing your views.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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This shape poetry is very nice. I like the image of the tilted wine glass with wine being poured into it. The idea of a shape poem is very clever and your comments in it are thought-provoking. My favorite line is the last one, where you discuss attitude changes. I agree they are made from inside. Your rhymes are interesting and provocative. I especially like, "smothers" and "others" as well as "empty" and "plenty." I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing your views.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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I thank you for your great complimentary review, Jesse
Hugs, Trisha
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Keep it short and sweet, I get it.
You are very welcome.
Jesse
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?Short and sweet? refers to your understanding of the alcohol, or me wanting a shorter review! I enjoy yours.
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Neither. Sorry. I was just being a little sarcastic about your short response to my review. I am happy you enjoy my reviews.
Have a nice Wednesday.
Jesse
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Oh, I?m sorry. Nothing insensitive intended.
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No problem, no worries.
Jesse
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Great!
Comment from Rikki66
A most clever posting. The design, as well as the poem, conveys your message, Do not whine do not be a pessimist. believe in the positives and let the wine flow freely.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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A most clever posting. The design, as well as the poem, conveys your message, Do not whine do not be a pessimist. believe in the positives and let the wine flow freely.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Rikki, I thank you for your great review and your generous rating. Cheers!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written shape poem about the wine glass full of grape juice that gives us the ability to uplift others while our whining breaks down relationships.
typo
sour gripes[grapes] can't admire
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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A very well-written shape poem about the wine glass full of grape juice that gives us the ability to uplift others while our whining breaks down relationships.
typo
sour gripes[grapes] can't admire
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Sandra, I thank you for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this unique poem about the importance of choosing a good attitude. It is a battle in this life, but it is very important. Have a great day!
Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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Thanks for sharing this unique poem about the importance of choosing a good attitude. It is a battle in this life, but it is very important. Have a great day!
Bill
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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You too, Bill. I thank you for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
You did a great job with this shape poem. They are hard to do sometimes. You're right about attitude. I believe attitude is 97% of everything. It's all how you set your mind.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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You did a great job with this shape poem. They are hard to do sometimes. You're right about attitude. I believe attitude is 97% of everything. It's all how you set your mind.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
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damommy, I thank you for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent piece using poetry and the shape pattern that is magnificiently done. Advice given on how you want to live life, it is your decision. Imaginative idea
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Excellent piece using poetry and the shape pattern that is magnificiently done. Advice given on how you want to live life, it is your decision. Imaginative idea
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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I have my creative moments! I thank you for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Sound advice! This is an enjoyable read and the little word play throughout make it very entertaining. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Sound advice! This is an enjoyable read and the little word play throughout make it very entertaining. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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What a nice surprise to ?see you? again. Welcome! Thank you for reviewing, I?m glad you enjoyed my penning,
hugs, Trisha
Comment from dmt1967
I like the way you made the picture from words, very clever. Just one small point. I know it needs to look like a stem but 'to which you decide' doesn't really make sense. How about, 'To which; you decide.' This way, it's like two sentences joined. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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I like the way you made the picture from words, very clever. Just one small point. I know it needs to look like a stem but 'to which you decide' doesn't really make sense. How about, 'To which; you decide.' This way, it's like two sentences joined. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you! Actually, it is supposed to represent the base bottom of the glass on the outside surface.but I appreciate your candor
Hugs, Trisha