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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from dovemarie
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Dear Ricky, Perfect love poem, and you have all the right things in mind to be "swearing to God" for. This poem is full of breath, life, giving, and new beginning. Dove

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks dear always a pleasure.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Earl Corp
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This poem Swear to God has a very positive message that we should all heed give thanks for everynew day. If this isn't a faith poetry contest entry it should be. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks Earl.
    Originally written as a Love Poem for a special 30 year old.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a very unique take on that phrase that has definitely lost its true connotation in the overuse in our daily language... Nothing without the one to whom you swear... great job! ;) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Thanks much appreciated.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from moongirlwriter
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An interesting take on "swearing". Each and every time I read the word, I felt a twinge of my mom telling me no, no, no it's not okay to swear. Even at church, I remember my pastor telling me as a child that swearing is taking the name of God in vain. But, here you've used it in every positive way relating to a loving, caring, compassionate God. Thanks for helping me grow up and out, swearing can be used for good as well. :) Nice job, enjoyed reading this piece.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    Glad to be of assistance.
    Ricky
reply by moongirlwriter on 20-Jun-2019
    It's never to late to learn a thing or two.:)
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reply by moongirlwriter on 20-Jun-2019
    Well. .. don't know what happened here but I did enjoy this piece, again. :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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You will never go wrong or stray far from the light if you think of God each and every day. All He wants from us is our love and your piece exudes that beautifully. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
    My pleasure.
    From one Angel
    To another.
    Ricky