Logan's Run
When the past comes back to haunt you7 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"Logans Run"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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"Logans Run"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, its great to hear from you. :)
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay okay okay. It takes a lot of talent to put a whole story into a poem. Not only did you do that, but it was a great story! Fantastic.
I can see why you win so many of these poetry contests. I think this is a wonderful entry for the contest. Great, impressive work!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Okay okay okay. It takes a lot of talent to put a whole story into a poem. Not only did you do that, but it was a great story! Fantastic.
I can see why you win so many of these poetry contests. I think this is a wonderful entry for the contest. Great, impressive work!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this amazing review and for your kind words...it's really appreciated. :)
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Well deserved. Very good piece of writing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fascinating Wild West story filled with gun crime and grit and determination! These are stories that shaped the Wild West and it must have been a touch time back then, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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A fascinating Wild West story filled with gun crime and grit and determination! These are stories that shaped the Wild West and it must have been a touch time back then, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review..:)
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I remember a preacher saying once that 'money had no personality.'
I did not agree with that statement then and I still don't.
A shame that the son's integrity did not match what he preached.
Well written with an astute message. Good rhythm, rhyme and near rhyme.
Warmly,
Juliette
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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I remember a preacher saying once that 'money had no personality.'
I did not agree with that statement then and I still don't.
A shame that the son's integrity did not match what he preached.
Well written with an astute message. Good rhythm, rhyme and near rhyme.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for such a thoughtful review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your poem Logan's Run reminds me of an old show the Guns of Will Sonnett. You made it rhyme, make sense, and it entertained me. Nice job. Good luck in the contest, no disrespect but I hope you take second place.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Your poem Logan's Run reminds me of an old show the Guns of Will Sonnett. You made it rhyme, make sense, and it entertained me. Nice job. Good luck in the contest, no disrespect but I hope you take second place.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I really appreciate the nice review!
Comment from Cybertron1986
I like the infusion of both story and poem here. The characters and the plot were both exciting and reminiscent of those old western flicks I watched as a child. This was appealing and creatively presented. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I like the infusion of both story and poem here. The characters and the plot were both exciting and reminiscent of those old western flicks I watched as a child. This was appealing and creatively presented. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for reading. I loved westerns as a child and still do. I appreciate you taking time to review. :)
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this western narrative that had an untypical twist at the end. Good characterization of both Logan and his outlaw father. Interesting to see how Logan stands up to the outlaw who then respects the man Logan's become. Especially noteworthy was your use of dialog within the poem. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I enjoyed this western narrative that had an untypical twist at the end. Good characterization of both Logan and his outlaw father. Interesting to see how Logan stands up to the outlaw who then respects the man Logan's become. Especially noteworthy was your use of dialog within the poem. Rod
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this nice review, i always appreciate it.
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My pleasure. Rod