World
Come to the aid of our!17 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. You've presented a powerful message in just a few syllables. Our world indeed is facing lots of challenges that could cause these types of reactions. We need to come together under God and work these things out. I enjoyed this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I like this. You've presented a powerful message in just a few syllables. Our world indeed is facing lots of challenges that could cause these types of reactions. We need to come together under God and work these things out. I enjoyed this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
There are a lot of writers here to post poems or long pieces about the environment and what the human population is doing to destroy or damage it. It's funny that they take so many words to say what you have said in just a few short syllables. Nice job! *smile*
One small notes though - you don't need a single comma in the whole post. *smile*
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
There are a lot of writers here to post poems or long pieces about the environment and what the human population is doing to destroy or damage it. It's funny that they take so many words to say what you have said in just a few short syllables. Nice job! *smile*
One small notes though - you don't need a single comma in the whole post. *smile*
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gail Denham
And that's the truth - the only thing to hold onto is that Jesus will return, at the time God has ordained, taking those who accept Him to heaven. Perhaps why He tarries is to allow more folks to become believers. For many right now is a sad time - Christians are being murdered in many countries. Awful.
Your poem brought things to mind.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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And that's the truth - the only thing to hold onto is that Jesus will return, at the time God has ordained, taking those who accept Him to heaven. Perhaps why He tarries is to allow more folks to become believers. For many right now is a sad time - Christians are being murdered in many countries. Awful.
Your poem brought things to mind.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from jenintorre
A great little 2-4-6 poem. Very well worded in so few syllables and very well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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A great little 2-4-6 poem. Very well worded in so few syllables and very well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent two, four, five. Seems to be a lot of fears about our country's future. As long as we hold tight to our belief in God, I believe he will pull us through. The US is what is holding the world together. Very good and factual poem.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Excellent two, four, five. Seems to be a lot of fears about our country's future. As long as we hold tight to our belief in God, I believe he will pull us through. The US is what is holding the world together. Very good and factual poem.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an arresting write - it offers glaring truth in its succinct verse and presentation - rhyming is even in the read - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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In my opinion, an arresting write - it offers glaring truth in its succinct verse and presentation - rhyming is even in the read - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about the world that seems to go dowNeill very fast we can try our best to save the world from destruction, but we cannot have the finalmighty decision.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about the world that seems to go dowNeill very fast we can try our best to save the world from destruction, but we cannot have the finalmighty decision.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from June Sargent
It might be too little too late. By the time we realize the consequences of abusing this planet, the damage could be irreversible. But, there still is a need for awareness. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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It might be too little too late. By the time we realize the consequences of abusing this planet, the damage could be irreversible. But, there still is a need for awareness. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Hitcher
We are living in very volatile times as far as mother nature is concerned and worrying times as far as world powers go. The future is actually looking quite scary at present, which is not a good thing now is it.
a thought provoking little contest entry, good luck!
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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We are living in very volatile times as far as mother nature is concerned and worrying times as far as world powers go. The future is actually looking quite scary at present, which is not a good thing now is it.
a thought provoking little contest entry, good luck!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
Those few words can say a whole lot about our country, our world we live in. So many shed tears over the last several years and the fear of what to come in the future.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Those few words can say a whole lot about our country, our world we live in. So many shed tears over the last several years and the fear of what to come in the future.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
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you're welcome