Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Sidewalks and Pathways "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
The rhyming in the first and last lines of each verse works well and doesn't detract from the free verse feel of the journey you take us through, on both concrete pathways and the pathways of life. Both have cracks at times that we need to overcome. Enjoy it,
cheers
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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The rhyming in the first and last lines of each verse works well and doesn't detract from the free verse feel of the journey you take us through, on both concrete pathways and the pathways of life. Both have cracks at times that we need to overcome. Enjoy it,
cheers
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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God Bless you, and Thank You for the Time to Read and Review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- this is quite the feat!! :) You've made some rhymes seem so easy yet i know you spent some hours on this one!! ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, using a smaller font so that your lines all 'fit' ... the run-over makes it a bit distracting and folks should be able to really appreciate what you've done here! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing such a cool testimony and responsibility in such a unique rhythm! ;) :)
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Wow -- this is quite the feat!! :) You've made some rhymes seem so easy yet i know you spent some hours on this one!! ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, using a smaller font so that your lines all 'fit' ... the run-over makes it a bit distracting and folks should be able to really appreciate what you've done here! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing such a cool testimony and responsibility in such a unique rhythm! ;) :)
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the you for the review and compliments. Will note the font sizes and adjust accordingly, Blessings!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The impact, effect of choosing and following sidewalks and pathways in life are expressed with orders of directions for effective use; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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The impact, effect of choosing and following sidewalks and pathways in life are expressed with orders of directions for effective use; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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God Bless you and Thank you for the review and compliments. Always very helpful and insightful.