The Mary Anne
Trawler struggles for purchase.15 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, this reminds me of two movies...The Perfect Storm...and The Poseidon Adventure...the sea has taken many lives Sweetie Pie...a blessing when they come home...I love your poem...and love your picture....very well written my sweet friend...much love...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Hi Kace, this reminds me of two movies...The Perfect Storm...and The Poseidon Adventure...the sea has taken many lives Sweetie Pie...a blessing when they come home...I love your poem...and love your picture....very well written my sweet friend...much love...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Happy Birthday to you! Thanks so much for reading Lindy Louie. Glad you enjoyed. Much love, Kace XXX
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Oh Sweetie Pie, thank you so very much my sweetie friend...and your sooooo welcome...always deserved...bunch of love to ya...Lindy Louie...xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Aussie, this is very well written - a good entry to the Free Style poem contest entry. Every stanza very poetic and well expressed. Good mention of Poseidon in two of your stanzas. I enjoyed the read - Good Luck in the contest - Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hi Aussie, this is very well written - a good entry to the Free Style poem contest entry. Every stanza very poetic and well expressed. Good mention of Poseidon in two of your stanzas. I enjoyed the read - Good Luck in the contest - Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hello Dorothy, Thank you so much for reading, glad you enjoyed my poem. XXK.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Your picture really captures the power and majesty of the sea and fits your poem so very well. Good luck in your free verse contest. You will do well!!
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Your picture really captures the power and majesty of the sea and fits your poem so very well. Good luck in your free verse contest. You will do well!!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Than you Sandra. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thanks also for the luck in the contest. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, this is a great entry for the Free Verse Poetry contest.
It is written well and allows the reader to feel the turbulent swells of the ferocious ocean viewing the brave trawler fishermen caught at sea but determined to return home. This is one job I would not like to do. I would be seasick the whole time. A most enjoyable read. Good luck! ~DD
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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K, this is a great entry for the Free Verse Poetry contest.
It is written well and allows the reader to feel the turbulent swells of the ferocious ocean viewing the brave trawler fishermen caught at sea but determined to return home. This is one job I would not like to do. I would be seasick the whole time. A most enjoyable read. Good luck! ~DD
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hello DD, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. A tough breed of men handling those fishing trawlers! Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Colin John
Hi ,Sorry just catching up. I loved this and anything about the sea
I thought it was Neptune but Poseidon sounds about right.
Loved the flow also. Kind regards Colin x
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hi ,Sorry just catching up. I loved this and anything about the sea
I thought it was Neptune but Poseidon sounds about right.
Loved the flow also. Kind regards Colin x
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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G'day Colin, Many thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. Cheers, Kay XX
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting story in a poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words, telling it like it is and very good imagery from the art work you chose. I would never want to try to do that. It looks too scary and dangerous! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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This is a very interesting story in a poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words, telling it like it is and very good imagery from the art work you chose. I would never want to try to do that. It looks too scary and dangerous! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello happy grandma, Thanks for reading my friend. Seamen risk their lives every day just to feed us. Love, Kay.
Comment from LIJ Red
After Clooney's "The Perfect Storm" and History channel's "Wicked Tuna" Americans will certainly relate to your poem. Looks like an excellent free verse entry to the contest. Cheers.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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After Clooney's "The Perfect Storm" and History channel's "Wicked Tuna" Americans will certainly relate to your poem. Looks like an excellent free verse entry to the contest. Cheers.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello new friend, glad you enjoyed. Usually, I only write rhyming poems, thought I might enter the contest. Cheers, K.
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my word, K, this is a terrific poem. Everything about it beautiful and the power of the sea and how small man is in comparison.
This is terrific and I wish you much great luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Oh my word, K, this is a terrific poem. Everything about it beautiful and the power of the sea and how small man is in comparison.
This is terrific and I wish you much great luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello my little spoon of Maple syrup. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed! Bless you, Kace XX
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sea has such mighty power and can toss a small ship about and fishermen risk their lives, especially if there is a storm. I enjoyed the ride here, (Poseidon charges his trident). I liked that line, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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The sea has such mighty power and can toss a small ship about and fishermen risk their lives, especially if there is a storm. I enjoyed the ride here, (Poseidon charges his trident). I liked that line, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello Dolly, thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, Kace XX
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an outstanding poem, Kace. Excellent word choices. Each wonderful stanza offers the reader a treat. "Up the mountain, down the trough" and "Poseidon laughs at the tiny dot" are just two examples. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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This is an outstanding poem, Kace. Excellent word choices. Each wonderful stanza offers the reader a treat. "Up the mountain, down the trough" and "Poseidon laughs at the tiny dot" are just two examples. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello dear friend Marilyn, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed! Bless you, Kace XX
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A terrific piece. Great job. :) Marilyn