Alone
A penetrating feeling of loss4 total reviews
Comment from Paul R Goddard
I like the sad imagery of this poem, redolent of nostalgia and feeling. Thus worthy of a high mark. It reminds me of an old 1930s song... "Love letters in the sand"
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I like the sad imagery of this poem, redolent of nostalgia and feeling. Thus worthy of a high mark. It reminds me of an old 1930s song... "Love letters in the sand"
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Yes, I remember the Pat Boone version in the 50's. Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from L. A. Stanley
Very sweet while being sad. I can feel the lonely person walking alone on the beach and missing their loved one. Whether the loved one is gone because the relationship broke, or because they passed away, it's still a lonely thing to miss a loved one. Your words painted this picture for me and I like it when words paint pictures and make me feel feelings. Beautiful picture, too. Good job!
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Very sweet while being sad. I can feel the lonely person walking alone on the beach and missing their loved one. Whether the loved one is gone because the relationship broke, or because they passed away, it's still a lonely thing to miss a loved one. Your words painted this picture for me and I like it when words paint pictures and make me feel feelings. Beautiful picture, too. Good job!
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work on this poem. You managed to create a story with only a few words. It makes the reader wonder what has happened, and where the subject might be headed on that lonely beach.
Good job, and best of luck on the contest,
-BT
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Great work on this poem. You managed to create a story with only a few words. It makes the reader wonder what has happened, and where the subject might be headed on that lonely beach.
Good job, and best of luck on the contest,
-BT
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks much for your read and review. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, nice piece of poetry. well done and great image too. I enjoyed the few meaningful words. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi, nice piece of poetry. well done and great image too. I enjoyed the few meaningful words. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the read, review and the kind words.