pride and joy
A story in a poem4 total reviews
Comment from L. A. Stanley
Very nice and sweetly written. Your words tell the story of how it feels to cross another person's path, then lose touch, and then cross paths again and realize you both remember each other. Even more touching to have that person tell you how you changed, guided, or touched their life in a positive way.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Very nice and sweetly written. Your words tell the story of how it feels to cross another person's path, then lose touch, and then cross paths again and realize you both remember each other. Even more touching to have that person tell you how you changed, guided, or touched their life in a positive way.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review and welcome to fan story. It was such a wonderful surprise and I needed a little boost right then. Cheers,
Comment from LisaMay
What a marvellous, wonderfully uplifting story. A testament to the power of vocation and the opportunity offered in finding it. And a testament to yourself as a volunteer, working selflessly to the point of exhaustion but getting this re-generating message in the form of Stephano.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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What a marvellous, wonderfully uplifting story. A testament to the power of vocation and the opportunity offered in finding it. And a testament to yourself as a volunteer, working selflessly to the point of exhaustion but getting this re-generating message in the form of Stephano.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thanks for the insightful and generous review. It was one of those rare moments of clarity that we cherish in this kooky world. Cheers.
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Kooky indeed. We just have to cherish the magic when it happens.
Comment from Tpa
, it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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, it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thanks for the thoughtful review. It was a fun write and I am glad that you enjoyed it, cheers,
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
How I enjoyed your poetic offering, and how I wish I had six stars to award you. Your story, delivery, flow, imagery = a very pleasing read. And, yes, I know how you must have felt when the young man said, "You gave me life; I'm happy." Smiles all around!
Beautiful
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
How I enjoyed your poetic offering, and how I wish I had six stars to award you. Your story, delivery, flow, imagery = a very pleasing read. And, yes, I know how you must have felt when the young man said, "You gave me life; I'm happy." Smiles all around!
Beautiful
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review and phantom star haha. Yes, it was like a powerful second wind when he said that, exactly what I needed then. Cheers,