Poetic Treasures and Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Modern-Day Scripture"A book on nature and feelings and spirituality.
2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You bring some tragic events to the fore with your words here and such atrocities are remembered at certain times when we reflect on bygone years. Shameful acts of violence when Easter is a time for forgiveness, a poignant write, happy Easter to you and yours, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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You bring some tragic events to the fore with your words here and such atrocities are remembered at certain times when we reflect on bygone years. Shameful acts of violence when Easter is a time for forgiveness, a poignant write, happy Easter to you and yours, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Dovemarie, this poem is deserving of two 6-stars. I'm not kidding. You have spoken to the failure of mankind to be faithful and trusting of the Lord God. You have pointed to the disobedience of mankind to the word and will of the Lord. The same problem as with Adam and eve in the beginning. The messiah has come and died for our transgressions. Prophets have spoken. What's left is the judgment.
You may wish to correct this little error...I way to all fathers.
I think you meant "say".
I trust you will do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Dovemarie, this poem is deserving of two 6-stars. I'm not kidding. You have spoken to the failure of mankind to be faithful and trusting of the Lord God. You have pointed to the disobedience of mankind to the word and will of the Lord. The same problem as with Adam and eve in the beginning. The messiah has come and died for our transgressions. Prophets have spoken. What's left is the judgment.
You may wish to correct this little error...I way to all fathers.
I think you meant "say".
I trust you will do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Dear Sandra Elizabeth (nice name) thank you for your comments, review, and for pointing out the typo. Will go in and correct. Dovemarie
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You're very welcome!