Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very wel-written rhyming poem about the fun and games we can have at the beach, but the sting of a jellyfish is not fun. I am in for the ice-cream part.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you :)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains detailing a beach day. Did you actually get stung by a jellyfish? I am glad you saved the happier memories as well. Enjoy Florida beaches- Joan

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

You're nice. Thank you :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Alicia, I hope your arm is ok....
jelly fish stings can be soooo painful...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love the picture...
now charge your laptop...very well written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Hi! I didn't go in the beach water. Just a walk. Thank you

Have a happy and safe 4th of July :)

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Hi Alicia. After a long time I'm back!!! Such a lovely poem you wrote. Nice impressions of a day at the beach with great rhythm and rhyme.
Yuck, creepy that jellyfish, but indeed it can't stay. LOL so you have to oick it of..... Fia

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you again. God bless you :)

reply by Dutchie on 04-Jul-2019

You're so welcome, Alicia

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Alicia. You are at the library, but I thought you were at the beach! Your poem gives the reader a good description of a day spent swimming and enjoying the shore. Jellyfish scary--ice cream good. An enjoyable poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Hi Marilyn! I just went for a walk on the beach, but it spun my creativity. I wanted to return, but there were things to do.

Thank you.

Have a happy & safe 4th of July.

Hearts & hugs,
Alicia

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I just love your beachy poem Miss Alicia,
and the artwork you chose is delightful!
Enjoy your library time!!
Have a beautiful Easter!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you

Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a pleasant read, sunnilicous. It had a good flow to it and I could feel the sun, then the sting of the jellyfish (which has happened to me) and ice cream did follow. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Thank you :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing about your time at the beach! I hope you recovered from that jellyfish sting! Some are poisonous. Maybe you needed that ice cream!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Hi! The jellyfish sting was years ago. I just walked on the beach. No swims this particular trip. Thank you :)

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

It's always the right time of day for ice cream. Why would a jellyfish sting make you brave? Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was entertaining. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019

Hi Earl. You have to touch the jellyfish to pull it off you. That could sting more... Yikes. Thank you

Have a happy & safe 4th of July. God bless you :)