Faith ?
Poem 5/7/57 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual 5-7-5, Faith?, has the right set up and reminds of that a goal for the future, kept in a trusting soul, makes all burdens light.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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This spiritual 5-7-5, Faith?, has the right set up and reminds of that a goal for the future, kept in a trusting soul, makes all burdens light.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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An encouraging review zanya
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I love this poem of faith because not only is it beautifully eye-appealing, but the words had natural flow and significant meaning. Your words eloquently expressed what life without faith is. This is an EXCELLENT contest entry!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I love this poem of faith because not only is it beautifully eye-appealing, but the words had natural flow and significant meaning. Your words eloquently expressed what life without faith is. This is an EXCELLENT contest entry!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thanks for those words of encouragement- most welcome ! zanya
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Love & hugs! It was my pleasure to review :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
How true. It would be a rather useless existence if there was no structure surrounding it and no meaning to reach for. Very apt. Your picture says it all............. barren land.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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How true. It would be a rather useless existence if there was no structure surrounding it and no meaning to reach for. Very apt. Your picture says it all............. barren land.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Yes indeed - thanks for that interesting commentary zanya
Comment from JudyE
This is a great entry for a 'faith' based contest. I like the 'wobble aimlessly' as it describes to perfection what humans do if they have no, or little, faith. The pathways do seem thorny at such times too. Good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is a great entry for a 'faith' based contest. I like the 'wobble aimlessly' as it describes to perfection what humans do if they have no, or little, faith. The pathways do seem thorny at such times too. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from QC Poet
Great captivating read, just wondering if the Faith in the photo included with your posting will count as another syllable.
Beautiful photo included with your posting. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Great captivating read, just wondering if the Faith in the photo included with your posting will count as another syllable.
Beautiful photo included with your posting. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Carla Trinklein
This is exactly what a life void of faith is...you've captured it. Aimless, thorny, wobbly. Your words say it all. Faith can't be seen, but it's absence is felt. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is exactly what a life void of faith is...you've captured it. Aimless, thorny, wobbly. Your words say it all. Faith can't be seen, but it's absence is felt. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Absolutely - great review -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest.
Excellent descriptive words, like wobble and thorny.
Wonderful picture choice to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest.
Excellent descriptive words, like wobble and thorny.
Wonderful picture choice to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Delighted with this review -thanks for reading zanya