NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Untitled Introspective"National Poetry Writing Month
12 total reviews
Comment from mkflood
Hey pass some of those Oreos..lol..oh I couldn't resist. Wink..I do thank you for selecting my work..so if you start to feeling down stop by YouTube and search "MKFlood Presents" and I assure you at least one of the many music videos will put a smile on your face. Warning! You might even start tapping your foot during the video.. wink.. thanks again... MKFlood
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
  |
Hey pass some of those Oreos..lol..oh I couldn't resist. Wink..I do thank you for selecting my work..so if you start to feeling down stop by YouTube and search "MKFlood Presents" and I assure you at least one of the many music videos will put a smile on your face. Warning! You might even start tapping your foot during the video.. wink.. thanks again... MKFlood
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
-
Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and introspective what we often have to do to see where we are and what is the things that make us happy and make us feel content.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
A very well-written poem and introspective what we often have to do to see where we are and what is the things that make us happy and make us feel content.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Sandra! Thank you :)
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this read, sunnilicious. The flow was great and the rhyme scheme gave it a smooth read. The piece felt comfortable and I loved the last line. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
I enjoyed this read, sunnilicious. The flow was great and the rhyme scheme gave it a smooth read. The piece felt comfortable and I loved the last line. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
Great job, Alicia! I like how you stitched together the first nine lines starting with "I live" and you even use in in the last line, too. So glad you found a good balance! Here's to LIFE!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
Great job, Alicia! I like how you stitched together the first nine lines starting with "I live" and you even use in in the last line, too. So glad you found a good balance! Here's to LIFE!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is an excellent introspective poem, Alicia.
Lounging on your sofa, writing the blues, wearing PJ's and eating Oreos ... what's NOT to like about that! :) Sounds like a good way to spend some time on a Saturday.
"I live for spontaneous weekends" ... luv this! Nothing planned, just go with the flow. It doesn't sound to me like you live in a "daze", but that you're just trying to find yourself, and what it is you like. And that's a good thing in my books. Once again, Alicia, another unique offering you're given to your readers. The repetition of "I live for ..." conveys that you are passionate about what you like to do. I like it. A lot!
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
This is an excellent introspective poem, Alicia.
Lounging on your sofa, writing the blues, wearing PJ's and eating Oreos ... what's NOT to like about that! :) Sounds like a good way to spend some time on a Saturday.
"I live for spontaneous weekends" ... luv this! Nothing planned, just go with the flow. It doesn't sound to me like you live in a "daze", but that you're just trying to find yourself, and what it is you like. And that's a good thing in my books. Once again, Alicia, another unique offering you're given to your readers. The repetition of "I live for ..." conveys that you are passionate about what you like to do. I like it. A lot!
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Connie. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your introspections and repeats for emphasis. I am glad to hear that you are comfortable with yourself and do not need to deal with hypotheticals. Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
I admired your introspections and repeats for emphasis. I am glad to hear that you are comfortable with yourself and do not need to deal with hypotheticals. Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. You GO, girl! I'm with you. No sense dwelling on "woulda, coulda, shoulda." Life is to be enjoyed and dealing with what we've got on our plate with a positive attitude. An excellent poem. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
Hi Alicia. You GO, girl! I'm with you. No sense dwelling on "woulda, coulda, shoulda." Life is to be enjoyed and dealing with what we've got on our plate with a positive attitude. An excellent poem. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Marilyn! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This piece, Untitled Introspective, touches on many of the reasons for living that we all have, while others think we are fooling ourselves.
Enjoying routine which limits dramatic upheavals is a personal goal.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
This piece, Untitled Introspective, touches on many of the reasons for living that we all have, while others think we are fooling ourselves.
Enjoying routine which limits dramatic upheavals is a personal goal.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Bill! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Whatever happens, let them say anything, let everyone think of life anyway they like, you know and believe what you want out of life, why you live, you live for self-pleasure and success; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
Whatever happens, let them say anything, let everyone think of life anyway they like, you know and believe what you want out of life, why you live, you live for self-pleasure and success; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Al! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It seems like this drink is controlling your life here in your poem, but I suspect it is slightly tongue in cheek. We do rely on our routines though, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
|
It seems like this drink is controlling your life here in your poem, but I suspect it is slightly tongue in cheek. We do rely on our routines though, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
-
Hi Dolly! No drinking just drive. Thank you. Hugs :)