Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I like the idea behind this one, that our best words are gifts from the Almighty. In the beginning was the Word and the Word was God, or so the good Book says.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

Thank you for the Kind review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Please dictate Your words to me
Bring life to my pen
Share the truths that are unknown
Then share them once again
I think we all need this
I love this
God bless

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Lordinajamjar

Excellent

Yvon I enjoyed your poetic prayer asking for help in hearing and sharing the word in verse.

I hope you receive what you long for and I wish you well in expressing the the write words.

Best
John

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

I've been getting these little boons all my life. Just thought I would share one of them.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a lovely poem of creativity and freedom.
I like the rhyme and the rhythm is wonderful when read aloud.
Thanks so much for sharing. Very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

Why thank you for this kind review

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Little Boons", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I liked this read, Yvon. It had a good flow to it and the rhyme scheme made it read very smoothly. I really liked the last two lines the best and the aspect of spiritual freedom. Nice job.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review. Nice you enjoyed it.

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

I assume you're asking God for a few boons. One never knows when God will bestow a great blessing - sometimes in a way that doesn't at first look inviting. This is a thinking poem as it ends with the plea that our soul can be free. Free in Jesus Christ I think.
Good poem

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Thanks for the kind and thoughtful review.

Comment from Jonbeyond

Exceptional

Your practice of meditation is the meekness that the Lord finds habitable ... He goes to those who invite Him in ... if one accepts the Taoist ... prayer and meditation are the same

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Nice. Thanks for the fine review.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Yvon,

What a delightful piece of poetry you've penned here, my friend!

One offering for your consideration:

"Open up the avenues
That evades the human mind "

I think this might read more fluidly as (avenues) "evade" the human mind.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Yeah, so did I but using spell check said it was wrong. Thanks I'll change it back.

reply by HealingMuse on 27-Mar-2019

Hi Yvon, Didn't bother me a bit, but I'm sure you might get some nit picking from others. ;-) Jan

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Fixed

Comment from Ross E Silke

Excellent

This is neat and fun to read! I like how it provokes thought and makes the reader think. I'm not sure, though, what a little boon is? Maybe in your author notes you should explain the meaning of 'boon,' as I'm still not sure after reading. But I get what your trying to convey. I like the colours and the message. I like the ending about the spirit being free. Cleverly composed. Unique!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

A boon is a gift. Usually from God.