Weep Not for Me
A man goes to war7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, Weep Not for Me, has the right set up for syllables and honors those who went off to the first world war. The war to end all wars.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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This 1-6-1 poem, Weep Not for Me, has the right set up for syllables and honors those who went off to the first world war. The war to end all wars.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks Bill.
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John
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a very written poem and a great contest entry. Your poem conforms to the requirements and the image complents your verse well. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a very written poem and a great contest entry. Your poem conforms to the requirements and the image complents your verse well. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you Muse. :) This didn't place in the contest but it was still fun.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Goodbyes are never easy and sometimes we cannot help to cry when we see someone very close to our hearts are going far away for a very long time.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Goodbyes are never easy and sometimes we cannot help to cry when we see someone very close to our hearts are going far away for a very long time.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from Rmocruz
First of all you have conformed to the contest format.
You have presented a thought provoking scenario
ambiguously, as to inspire further contemplation.
Excellent writing, appropriate art choice.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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First of all you have conformed to the contest format.
You have presented a thought provoking scenario
ambiguously, as to inspire further contemplation.
Excellent writing, appropriate art choice.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thank you, your comments are much appreciated. You also picked up on the intentional ambiguity.
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I love ambiguity.
Your welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is something I do all the time as I often say goodbye, I used to cry every time, but I try not to these days because I make everyone else cry too! I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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This is something I do all the time as I often say goodbye, I used to cry every time, but I try not to these days because I make everyone else cry too! I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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You are so kind Dolly. Your words carry great weight with me.
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Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three excellent rhymes
and a sad message for all
That these wars must never be repeated.
Perfect picture choice
Good luck
RS
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three excellent rhymes
and a sad message for all
That these wars must never be repeated.
Perfect picture choice
Good luck
RS
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Good syllable 1-6-1 count. Complimentary artwork too for a man goes to war. I enjoyed reading it a few times over. The rhyme worked well also. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Good syllable 1-6-1 count. Complimentary artwork too for a man goes to war. I enjoyed reading it a few times over. The rhyme worked well also. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
