The Other Door
free verse20 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is a lovely poem, filled with hope for those who feel hopeless. I saw no errors and felt it very well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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This is a lovely poem, filled with hope for those who feel hopeless. I saw no errors and felt it very well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from QC Poet
So much of Life relies on the walking out of the dark into the Light in many of Humanities daily reoccurrances.
Thank you so much for Sharing your Gifts and insight,
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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So much of Life relies on the walking out of the dark into the Light in many of Humanities daily reoccurrances.
Thank you so much for Sharing your Gifts and insight,
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the insightful review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
The Other Door is a well-written poem that uses the door as a metaphor for opportunities. In this story, the open door represents new opportunities new choice or the closed-door represents the more mundane, more of the same.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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The Other Door is a well-written poem that uses the door as a metaphor for opportunities. In this story, the open door represents new opportunities new choice or the closed-door represents the more mundane, more of the same.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this insightful review.
Comment from royowen
It is true that the weather has an affect on the mood of the beholder, this, of course should not be, I believe emotions were given as servants, not masters, however they are a very strong influence in our lives, but still, the morning brings a new day, beautifully written Val, and excellent post, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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It is true that the weather has an affect on the mood of the beholder, this, of course should not be, I believe emotions were given as servants, not masters, however they are a very strong influence in our lives, but still, the morning brings a new day, beautifully written Val, and excellent post, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for lovely and insightful review. Val
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My pleasure
Comment from kahpot
Leaving the unwanted in hopes of finding the necessary, you have to be brave to close one door in hope of finding another, this is what I read in this wonderful work, excellent, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Leaving the unwanted in hopes of finding the necessary, you have to be brave to close one door in hope of finding another, this is what I read in this wonderful work, excellent, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank for "getting" my little free verse. Val
Comment from way2gokevs
Very nice thoughtful poem in free verse............ Once through the door a different aspect on life beckons....Thanks for sharing your work..
Have a lovely day. Cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Very nice thoughtful poem in free verse............ Once through the door a different aspect on life beckons....Thanks for sharing your work..
Have a lovely day. Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from LisaMay
What a lovely presentation! In picture and words you have captured the essence of opportunity, when we can step into welcoming light to be embraced by positivity and hope, leaving despair behind. Sometimes another door is opened by someone else to help us, sometimes we have to give it a shove ourselves, sometimes it is just luck being in the right place at the right time. But with the right attitude we can experience that heart-expanding sensation of freedom to choose the best for ourselves.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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What a lovely presentation! In picture and words you have captured the essence of opportunity, when we can step into welcoming light to be embraced by positivity and hope, leaving despair behind. Sometimes another door is opened by someone else to help us, sometimes we have to give it a shove ourselves, sometimes it is just luck being in the right place at the right time. But with the right attitude we can experience that heart-expanding sensation of freedom to choose the best for ourselves.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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This is a fantastic review. You captured may meaning, which many don't. Thank you Val Crisson
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Oh super, I'm glad I got it right in my interpretation. You obviously write in my language for understanding.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
A good reminder that when one door closes another is bound to appear that you can enter into the sunlight.
Nicely done. A good contender and good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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A good reminder that when one door closes another is bound to appear that you can enter into the sunlight.
Nicely done. A good contender and good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you
Comment from JudyE
I enjoyed your verse and also liked the visual appearance of the words. The imagery is effective contrasting the cold, dark, despair, sorrow with the hope and optimism seen through the open door. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your verse and also liked the visual appearance of the words. The imagery is effective contrasting the cold, dark, despair, sorrow with the hope and optimism seen through the open door. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the fabulous review
Comment from donette1914
very nice
you put some thought in this and it shows.
very interesting of words that you use to draws ones in
i feel your an outstanding writer
it was a pleasure to read your work
i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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very nice
you put some thought in this and it shows.
very interesting of words that you use to draws ones in
i feel your an outstanding writer
it was a pleasure to read your work
i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. It was a joy to read.