Deep in the Woods
A quatern13 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
We all have a special place where we can soak up the pure energy that invigorates our soul. Surrounded by living trees that give you inspiration and the critters that forage amongst the leaves; peace, perfect peace.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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We all have a special place where we can soak up the pure energy that invigorates our soul. Surrounded by living trees that give you inspiration and the critters that forage amongst the leaves; peace, perfect peace.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the generous rating and review. I'm so glad you enjoyed my retreat in the woods!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Quatern about a place deep in the woods that can bring a feeling of peace to the heart and soul. Your repeating line work very well in this poem and the rhyming seems to be a very good combination.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Quatern about a place deep in the woods that can bring a feeling of peace to the heart and soul. Your repeating line work very well in this poem and the rhyming seems to be a very good combination.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. I loved the repeating line and marveled how it changed from stanza to stanza, though the words remained the same. The artwork was a great compliment to the words.
~MP~
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. I loved the repeating line and marveled how it changed from stanza to stanza, though the words remained the same. The artwork was a great compliment to the words.
~MP~
Comment Written 02-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate it.
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--I almost missed the deer in the wonderful silhouetted artwork! I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats, along with your "Jason" analogy and "treasure" metaphor. Here's to "Inspiration"! -Joan
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Wow--I almost missed the deer in the wonderful silhouetted artwork! I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats, along with your "Jason" analogy and "treasure" metaphor. Here's to "Inspiration"! -Joan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights. Always nice to hear from you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great potlatch poem, June. The quatern is one of my favorites. I always rhyme mine as you have done. Your lines flow smoothly with a special message. Communing with nature allows one's mind to focus on beauty. Yes, then new fresh ideas come to you. The picture is beautiful and a great pairing. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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This is a great potlatch poem, June. The quatern is one of my favorites. I always rhyme mine as you have done. Your lines flow smoothly with a special message. Communing with nature allows one's mind to focus on beauty. Yes, then new fresh ideas come to you. The picture is beautiful and a great pairing. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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So glad this poem on escaping into the deep woods resonates with you as a poet. What better place to refresh and get inspired.
Thanks for the kind review!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a well written quatern, June.
I love the way you slip from woods to
words and adjust the quatrain to the
action. Well done my friend.
Nice presentation.
Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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This is a well written quatern, June.
I love the way you slip from woods to
words and adjust the quatrain to the
action. Well done my friend.
Nice presentation.
Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this escape into the deep woods!
Comment from Debbie Pope
As you intended, this is so peaceful, June. When I saw the title, I actually thought "good, this is one that I am going to enjoy." And I did. I like the simplicity of the line that you repeat. I take a walk in the woods nearby everyday. As soon as I get under the tree canopy, "calmness reigns."
This is nice, June.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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As you intended, this is so peaceful, June. When I saw the title, I actually thought "good, this is one that I am going to enjoy." And I did. I like the simplicity of the line that you repeat. I take a walk in the woods nearby everyday. As soon as I get under the tree canopy, "calmness reigns."
This is nice, June.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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So glad this poem resonated with you as a poet. We are refreshed and inspired by nature walks. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from JudyE
I read another poem here where the same line comes 1st in the 1st verse, 2nd in the 2nd verse, etc. Is this a feature of this type of poem? It's very effective.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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I read another poem here where the same line comes 1st in the 1st verse, 2nd in the 2nd verse, etc. Is this a feature of this type of poem? It's very effective.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my effort at writing a quatern. I've always liked this format of the repeating line moving down the stanzas. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Unusual but it is somewhat common to some, as you find peace deep in the woods and deep in the words; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing Write for 1000 Years! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Unusual but it is somewhat common to some, as you find peace deep in the woods and deep in the words; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing Write for 1000 Years! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this write June because it is when we walk in the woods and outdoors that we find our inspiration to write our poetry! A joy to read your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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I loved this write June because it is when we walk in the woods and outdoors that we find our inspiration to write our poetry! A joy to read your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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So glad this poem resonated with you as a poet. Always easy to find inspiration in nature. Thank you for your kind review.